Once Upon A Halloween...

[devilz_workshop]

I used to scoff at the dumb things people do in horror movies. In fact, I had made a list of things never to do in a haunted house. And this is the last thing that should be running through my head at this very moment. Get a grip, Dana! We were trying to figure out how to get out of this place. The books falling off the shelf was more than enough

Comments

[rayaso]

I hope this was true! This was so well told, and I certainly did not expect the ending. I enjoyed it thoroughly.

[devilz_workshop]

Thank you. Unfortunately, this was fiction. Glad you liked it.

[majesticzaichik]

Haha! Such a creative yet literal take on the topic. I really liked this.

[devilz_workshop]

Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it.

[mamas_minion]

Very cool story and I love the marriage proposal at the end.

[devilz_workshop]

Thank you

[adoptedwriter]

Awesome!!! Bonus points for Tubular Bells / Exorcist music!

[devilz_workshop]

Thank you. No other music composition has come close to giving me goosebumps.

[halfshellvenus]

I didn't expect that ending either (and thank goodness it wasn't ultimately a death-plot by that creepy, invisible child).

But did she say yes? Because that kind of scare might have altered her opinion about Chuck!

[devilz_workshop]

Knowing Dana (she is my creation after all), I bet she said yes. Chuck and Dana are two of a kind. Pretty sure if he would've proposed any other way, she would have politely asked him to try again.