A Patchwork Heart

Apr 19, 2017 04:18

“It's not your fault Charles. Rita didn't deserve a nice guy like you.” , Megan tried consoling Charles. “You were too good for her ( Read more... )

friendship, therealljidol, heartbreak, week 15

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eternal_ot April 19 2017, 10:57:46 UTC
Trust friends to help you get over a heartbreak, eh? This made me smile with all the song references. I especially loved the lines "Relationships are like glass. Sometimes it’s better to leave them broken than hurt yourself trying to put it back together. Or worse, having nothing strong to bind it.”

A nice take!

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i_17bingo April 19 2017, 12:47:40 UTC
That was too quick of a turnaround. He's just trying to lull them into a false sense of security, then he's going to get his phone back, then he's going to call her. I'm onto him.

I really enjoyed this. It was a nice slice of life with great dialogue and unique personalities for all the characters.

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banana_galaxy April 20 2017, 02:48:33 UTC
It's nice he has such caring friends who want to help him.

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adoptedwriter April 20 2017, 11:41:25 UTC
Good friends will put us back together!

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shadowwolf13 April 21 2017, 02:02:59 UTC
I love the music references. :)

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