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[devious_shini]

so i was doin this thing and this thing was doin real well and i was goin with this thing but then when i had the thing i hit a brick wall and now me n the thing aren't doin real well cause we hit a wall and we hit the wall real hard so no the thing ain't goin nowhere cause' the thing needs an inspiration infusion...just in case any you all got

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[suicide_whxre]

oOh. good beginning. except i was sort of lost with "the key to keep her geneartion to old heart beating" bit. typos, perhaps? i'm not sure what kind of a person s.a. alice dark is, but maybe she's in this situation due to what she had done the night before... something bad and evil and totally out of character for her. the vegas thing got me thinking about that... most people go to vegas and do shit they'd never dream of doing. but then again, there isn't a lot of info on these blue pills.. i took them to be pills aiding in her suicidal thinking, but then again they could be some kind of mysteriously magic pills, like in the matrix...

wow. so with this whole comment i didn't help you at all... whee!

kyu.