Together

Oct 02, 2012 08:54


Title: Together
Author: DevjaCaiora
Pairing: JunChun
Length: Oneshot
Genre: angst, drama 
Rating: PG
Warning: Fail ? lol
Beta : susuie =D
Summary: When Yoochun got a accident... Junsu want to do everything for his lover...
Yoochun and Junsu for ever )

together, oneshot, drama, angst, junchun

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roughmetal2 October 2 2012, 13:47:11 UTC
that was unexpected. i thought it was just a regular romantic story of a person sacrificing for his lover. so that was why i found it a bit unsettling that despite yoochun's condition, junsu seemed to revel on it and was not a bit upset. i was also caught by surprise that there's a big twist at the end. the story was nice though it could have used a little more build up before the revelation.

anyway, just wondering why junsu had to kill yoochun and himself when there's still a chance for him to escape.

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devjacaiora October 2 2012, 14:04:09 UTC
*Hide*

I was affraid that if I write to much everybody gonna found out to soon that Junsu wasn't Chun lover but a crazy fan TT_TT

when he found out that they found the driver, he was scare that at the moment they know that the driver was kill the day Chun got out they gonna know that something was wrong...

I didn't said nothing about the car but... since it's chun car... big chance that they can track it...

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freya_xiah October 2 2012, 14:37:01 UTC
i am tricked by you...
nice ending...even it is scary

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devjacaiora October 2 2012, 14:39:14 UTC
*jump*

really? =D
thanks for reading =D

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freya_xiah October 2 2012, 15:06:58 UTC
yepz...i enjoy reading it...^___^

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yvonne_akn October 2 2012, 17:19:33 UTC
waaaaaah....okay i was a bit confused at first so i have to pause and figure the bits of info at the bottom...i agree the ending was scary..hahahahaha! and dang it..i was reading it smoothly until the part where i realized that Junsu was the bad guy!

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devjacaiora October 3 2012, 23:36:44 UTC
I gave a really hiding hit maybe around the beginning lol when Su was in the cold room... lol

Su the bad crazy guy =D

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puuismyname October 2 2012, 20:39:08 UTC
OH MY GOD! JUNSU IS A PSYCHO!!!! >_< great story dear~ you make me believe Junsu really Micky's BF. oh my god sun~

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devjacaiora October 3 2012, 23:37:24 UTC
I don't see a crazy Su to much =D I love making him bad lol

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ieie_luph October 2 2012, 23:25:38 UTC
yeah.. I believe su is chun's lover keke
but at the end I was surprise..
maybe su, you just don't do it..
but I know love is blind right? :)

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devjacaiora October 3 2012, 23:38:27 UTC
lol Su was to much in love with his favorite Idol =D

I wrote him like if he was a sasaeng ( or saseang? lol ) except he was a little bit to crazy =D

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ieie_luph October 4 2012, 04:35:57 UTC
It's sasaeng kekeke
he's kinda creepy lol

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