Poem

May 03, 2005 02:48

I recently wrote this poem for my grumpers... let me know what you think ( Read more... )

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onelastime_s May 3 2005, 19:03:31 UTC
Wow, i absolutely love this poem.

I've not yet given romance,
To the woman in your eyes.
I've never heard your silent cries,
To dance within the night.

- great writing.

Christina is blessed to have your heart.
i'm happy for you

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...Wow. detonatinggnome May 10 2005, 05:05:31 UTC
Dude, you're getting even better. Been writing a lot lately? Seriously, that was good. (Other than a few typos. >.> But I'm psychotic about that stuff.) I actually just wish it was longer, I wanted to keep reading. A year ago I wouldn't have expected to see you writing that about anyone for a long time. I'm happy for you.

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