#07. these seconds and counting;

[dewberrie]

: these seconds and counting
: yunho/jaejoong | pg
: it takes time to make things right

Comments

[epskeppi]

I loved this..;;___;; even though it made me cry :'')
♥
awaawaa...I want to see YunJae together again, and this time, SMILING! T^T

[dewberrie]

why thank you. /wipes your tears. don't cry ;_;
♥ we all want them to be together again. definitely smiling.

[dongbangsuju20]

ahsjhdgf

I rarely read YunJae at all, i don't even know why, but I am so so glad that I have read this one <333

this is sooo beautiful and it breaks my heart just to fix it a bit at the end ♥

will be back after a second reading with a proper comment <333333

[dewberrie]

fdsfjl;
oh, thank you .///. this is nothing special, but i'm so happy you read it and enjoyed yourself, /tapes your heart back together.
this comment was love, ♥ but if you have more to say, then go ahead :') thanks~!

[dongbangsuju20]

sorry it took so long ;^;
*hides*

He’s a tumbling mass of sharp bones, broken smiles stretched over red lips, and eyes as wide as the world.

i love your description of him ♥

Yunho tries to count the amount of time it takes for his heart to start working properly again. He gets to five and Jaejoong is out of his arms, kissing lyrics into Yoochun’s cheeks and linking pinkies with Junsu.

asjdhfg why so beautiful? ;^;
*adores*

Changmin looks away, waiting to wake up as if this is some kind of dream. But it’s not and maybe that’s what they hate most.

aish .---. *cries*

It takes him three seconds to calm down long enough to say, “we’ll be okay,” and then another three for either of them to believe him.

(i suck at writing senseful things to such sentences because I just love them because they just touch my heart, but what could I say that is good enough? .-.)
♥

(and I love your idea with counting the seconds, always, again and again <3)

It takes Yunho all of two seconds to realize his heart was in that suitcase and he’s

[dewberrie]

first off: fjksdlajf;kljd ♥ omg, thank you.

secondly, i'm happy you like my jaejoong, he's usually someone i can't write well enough so just the fact that you love him like this is flattering to me. and that you love my yunjae enough to read more fics of this pairing - this alone speaks so much to me ♥

i don't think i have enough words to express how thankful i am for this comment. it's just, idk, so much to me. thank you thank you thank you~! you're too sweet and for that i'm going to remember this forever and ever /hugs.

:3 :D ♥

[byuldeureul]

Lame? Try so beautiful it made me tear up. ♥

asklfais;'/f;saf -- I don't even have the words to properly explain how much I loved this (and if I quoteback, I'll be quoting back THE ENTIRE THING) but just know that I enjoyed this immensely despite the fact that it seriously made me want to cry ;___; .

Loved this so much. Love your WRITING so much. Thank you for sharing this!

And I hope you don't mind if I friend you to keep up with future updates? :DD I would love to be able to know when you write (and I hope your writer's block will be going away soon? ;~; I hate writer's block and I know exactly how it feels but don't give up! >///< You can do it~~)

[dewberrie]

oh, oh, oh my. ♥ /hugs.

this comment, thank you, omg. i never expected to have this much of an impact with this little story ♥ :") /wipes your tears. please don't cry, ;__;

i'm happy to share, i'm just pleased that you liked it!~

and no, i don't mind. in fact i've already added you :) you're so sweet /hugs. (me too ;-; writer's block is a pain. thanks for your support - it means a lot to me) ♥ ♥

[jaeminftw]

I really hope this is what happens - because the part of the DBSK lawsuit that annoys me the most was that they were all SO CLOSE, and now they look so angry with each other.

So, when the clamor calms, I really hope they find each other again.

that being said, I loved this piece, though it did make me cry LOL.

<3

[dewberrie]

i know. i wish they'd be happy and smile again. ;_;
of course, ♥. it's what we all wish for :D

/hugs. no tears, happy ending ((':
thanks so much~! ♥

[moon1084]

how can you call this lame? this was just soooo beauiful! i am trying so hard so not to cry at the moment because i am at some family friends' home for thanksgiving. I will definitely be having this fic on my mind all day. my poor yunjae! i am praying really hard they make it thru this. I have a feeling they will. The ending was just i dont know i am speechless

[dewberrie]

uhm, i'm sorry for calling it lame, rofl. but don't cry, don't cry /huggles. ♥ and yes, they have to make it through, they're stronger than this.

thank you~♥ don't be sad any longer, smile :')