Book 1 - Chapter Two

[dezworks90]

Hey guys! So here is the second "chapter" of my book that I showed you guys a little while ago. Let me know what you guys think and any suggestions you may have are much appreciated! Enjoy :D

Comments

[chene_sims333]

Well i was just as sucked into this one as the last one. I really hope Avery makes it! If you remember I suggested Cam die (man that sounds horrible out of context) so I'm hoping you don't kill off Avery! I really like him!
granted should he live I really can't wait for when he sees Jarrod next :P
speaking of Jarrod someone needs to put their boot up his ass. Like i understan100% being peeved that your bride ran out on your wedding day, anybody would be, but he CLEARLY gives no fucks about her. Like if my fiance ran off on our wedding day and got into a car accident I would at least show concern for his safety. I would probably be in tears and apologizing for having a wedding when he wasn't ready. Jarrod is a dick, is the point I'm getting at.

I'm excited for more :)

[dezworks90]

Thank you so much for the comment!!
Yes Jarrod does seem like quite the asshole doesn't he? His character will be developed more soon and as the book continues. I am curious to see if you feel the same about him in the next chapter especially.
I remember your suggestions and I have definitely kept it in mind. I really hope I don't disappoint you with the decision I've made!
Thanks so much for reading and commenting <3