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After Planting, Before Harvesting, Just Growing
Aug 02, 2004 16:53
Captain Planet locked inside ironic biomes (
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bofwa
August 2 2004, 16:58:33 UTC
There is my fav poet where have you been???
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creampuff4all
August 3 2004, 01:04:43 UTC
oh stop sucking up. He isnt that good
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jamesterissoemo
August 2 2004, 18:32:50 UTC
wonderful.
i love your style.
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joshmay41465
August 2 2004, 22:09:55 UTC
great job.
started out really choppy, then sort of flowed together. the meaning is a tad vague, but i loved the symbolism as well. bravo!
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creampuff4all
August 3 2004, 01:06:01 UTC
meaning a tad vague? that's an understatement. The ramblings of a pseudo-intellectual teenage is more like it.
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creampuff4all
August 3 2004, 01:10:17 UTC
teenager*
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dfelon204409
August 3 2004, 02:43:35 UTC
this is my song
I wrote it myself
so don't sing along
I don't need your help
if you know the words
don't move your jaw
I don't go to your work
and do your job
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i love your style.
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started out really choppy, then sort of flowed together. the meaning is a tad vague, but i loved the symbolism as well. bravo!
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I wrote it myself
so don't sing along
I don't need your help
if you know the words
don't move your jaw
I don't go to your work
and do your job
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