Deserted Romance

[dfelon204409]

And so she hunched there posturing like a zombie

Comments

[sapid_1]

profound and melancholy. love the imagery. you're so talented.

[static_rhapsody]

It doesn't take much to fall in love with your metaphors. The free verse style of poetry doesn't work for many poets when they write more than 5 or so lines, it's so easy for the responder to loose interest without strict rhythm etc. But you used the style well and orchestrate sentences to drip with the beauty.

L.

[rainingstairs]

cheers! I tip my hat.