Comments | dhc_band: "Certainly," he said uncertainly, "Certainly."

dhc_band

"Certainly," he said uncertainly, "Certainly."

Aug 27, 2005 12:36

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dalivejournal August 27 2005, 17:08:34 UTC

it was good except moss isn't on the vikings anymore

wipeout916 August 27 2005, 18:31:21 UTC

You should do at least 2 chapters for each installment...

kuznyechik August 28 2005, 00:56:47 UTC

Your parents are still going crazy? =\

The story seems interesting!
I love the chess theme ;)

marc1990 August 28 2005, 16:54:56 UTC

Those guys must have been both good at chess and totally drunk. THey must have known the ONLY two move checkmate in French and been drunk enough to play it out.

I can feel the suspense and can't wait for somethin to pop out of the darkness.

I thought it was all good except for the 2nd sentence seemed like a run-on.

So long writer

theworstljever_ August 28 2005, 22:08:41 UTC

lol two-move checkmate, haha. Well, I'm sure the game's been going on a while at the start of the piece...?

marc1990 August 29 2005, 00:40:53 UTC

Nope. Trust me, that is a two moved check mate. The only one in chess. Play it out if u like.