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dhoney

Memorial Impressions; Proof of Numbers; Handy

Jul 28, 2010 10:30

Title: Memorial Impressions
Theme: Fourth Period: Art_Clay (4f), usako_mamoru, 2010 anniversary challenge
Genre: Fluff
Rating: G

( Like so many things with Darien, the moment was put away and never spoken of again. )

usako_mamoru anniversary challenge, endymion (neo-king), chibi-usa, darien, rini, usagi, serena, serenity (neo-queen), mamoru

Comments 11

rainbabie1 July 28 2010, 18:57:27 UTC

OMG, these were great. Memorial Impressions was beautiful - I teared up!!!!!

dhoney July 29 2010, 16:43:18 UTC

Thanks! Memorial Impressions was the one I really liked too! I wanted to do something with a bit more emotion than I've been giving most of these drabbles.

amethysth July 28 2010, 19:39:20 UTC

Awww, I loved these. The first one was so sweet, the second amusing, and that last one was absolutely cute (I learned products of nine in the same way when I was a kid XD). Great job!

dhoney July 29 2010, 16:44:17 UTC

I didn't learn that trick to products of nine 'til I was in college & had long since memorized them already. It's such a cool trick!

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed 'em!

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dhoney July 29 2010, 16:45:43 UTC

Rini and the maths side

*laughs* I didn't even think of that!

As always, thanks for all your awesome comments. I'm glad I was able to lose you in "Sum" - my kids used to NEVER understand why we needed to learn about negatives until I started mentioning money.

dsanti_queza July 29 2010, 16:10:21 UTC

Have I ever told you how much I love your work? <3

I've read several of your pieces since I first stumbled on usako_mamoru, and your writing never fails to amaze me. < sighs happily >

Take "Memorial Impressions" for example. It was so heartwarming~ <3 I absolutely love how Usagi understands Mamoru so well, and how she shows just how much she loves him. Just reading about it makes me feel all warm inside~ <3

And, the Math pieces were hilarious. XD I love your last lines to both of them! The perfect ending with the right amount of impact. ;)

Awesome, awesome lovely~ <3 Keep it up! :D
Kihana

dhoney July 29 2010, 16:48:11 UTC

Awww, thank you! I don't know that I remember receiving comments from you, or at least I've forgotten, so thanks so much for dropping me one now.

Usagi does understand Mamoru, sometimes better than he understand himself. She just wants him to have all the things she think everyone should have.

The math pieces were hard - I'm glad you liked the last lines, as without them, the pieces would be very... lukewarm. It's always hard to find a good ending w/o resorting too something too cliche-y.

Anyway, I hope you enjoy the rest of my drabbles, as well as all the other ones going on at the comm!

dsanti_queza July 29 2010, 18:32:10 UTC

Aw really!? Dratted. I must have skipped over commenting. Sometimes I tend to pass over stuff and forget about it, even though I say I'll go back to it later. -___- Sorry about that! But, I really do love your works! <3

And, yes, I shall try to enjoy the drabbles as much as I can~ ;) There are lots of really good ones here! <3

dhoney July 31 2010, 06:28:56 UTC

I might be lying and you actually did comment & I just don't remember. It's been a while since I've posted anything strictly U/M & I'm sometimes awful at commenting myself, so no apologizes necessary! :)

lovelylytton August 3 2010, 12:08:53 UTC

These are so adorable. The first one is my favourite: it's very like Usagi to remember this one moment in which she could tell that Mamoru missed having a family, and then re-create it years later. So thoughtful, so kind.

dhoney August 4 2010, 17:08:15 UTC

I like to think that Mamoru's background sometimes humbles Usagi. Yes, her dad is overprotective & mom is annoying & nosy & her brother is, well, a little brother but they are still her blood family & they love her. Mamoru's lack reminds her of the good despite the bad.