[Poem] No Binangkal, Penelope

[dhorz]

I wrote this poem for lit class. Pardon me for the grammatical errors (not a native English speaker, *hides*)

Title: No Binangkal, Penelope
Author: Neerod
Notes: Written in Odysseus' point of view, as a response to the Visayan poem 'Binangkal, Penelope' by Corazon Almerino, which is about a woman telling Penelope (Odysseus' wife) that instead of

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[sixthwinemaiden]

Oneechan~! ♥ HEARTS TO YOUR POEM! ^__^ I think it's only natural for Odysseus to wail since he has been gone for too long, only to be greeted by a binangkal thrown by Penelope. ^^;;

For an unknown reason, I had a comical scene playing in my mind while reading, so please pardon my comedy that may be out of place. *hides* Though the last statement broke my heart. (;_;) *is totally inconsistent*

*clings to you* If you really want to change your username, then do so! And let us know if you already did ne? :D

[dhorz]

Apologies for the late reply!

Thank you, Mana-chan! :D *hug* indeed, Odysseus had been gone for so long, and then Penelope would just throw something at him.

The last lines are my favorite. XD

And the rename. Well, since I'm a plus user, I won't be able to change my name that easily...I don't even know if I can find the strength to change it at all. It has...sentimental value. XD

I'll let you know.

[dhorz]

*hugs* Thank you muchly!

The Odyssey is a good tale. Odysseus is actually one of my most favorite characters in all of Greek myth, because he's intelligent. :D

[darkmage009]

that's one funny poem bout odysseus' sufferings.
binangkal of all the things... XD

[dhorz]

Thank you! :D

>.<

[anonymous]

if I was Odysseus EAT THE "Binangkal" FTW

-Istincs03-

Re: >.<

[dhorz]

Thank you. XDD