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diabola79

Chapter 7 of Eye

May 06, 2005 17:48

Has been quite a while since I updated, sorry 'bout that. There were exams and stuff, and you all know how that goes...

Anyway, here is the next chapter of Eye of the beholder.

( Chapter 7 - Knights in Rusty Armor )

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Comments 3

schehrezade_1 May 7 2005, 08:17:55 UTC

Oh god my stomach lurched at the end when the shop was shut I just know there's something wrong...Anya is okay right?? And Tara gah you rotter two of my fav characters gone and I just know it's the Knights who say Ni (sorry Monty Python moment all over now...)

Have to say the idea of the Knights is excellent the moral dilemma Buffy will face if she has to kill one will be interesting to read - I always felt that in the show the knights could've been used more - to exam their background would've been amazing - I always imagined them as an off shoot of the Templars - sorry rambling here *grin*

Joyce Dawn and Giles all in UK - what worries me now is Giles is not around as the stablizing influence in the group as he was at this point in the show. But have to say nice to see Dawn go *wink*

Spike's frustration at being unable to fight was perfect - I loved these lines in particular -

Spike only growls, his jaw tensely locked. Buffy sees sparks of rage dancing in his eyes before he shuts them tightly. Spike is too furious to form words. ( ... )

diabola79 May 7 2005, 09:24:57 UTC

Hehe, good to know I actually managed to have you worried there at the end. Wasn't sure it would work, since like you said it seems pretty easy to guess what happened to them ( ... )

schehrezade_1 May 8 2005, 05:18:08 UTC

OUTSTANDING you're working on a new chappie BRILLIAN!!

Ohhh you dropped a MASSIVE hint it might not be Buffy who has to deal with her morals about handling human enemies... (That wasn't saying to much, was it? And I might be lying after all ;-) ) hmmm now I am gonna be wracking my brains!!! MINX LOL!

The Templar idea - hee see we have similiar minds have you read The Holy Blood and the Holy Grail? Some interesting ideas in there that the guy who wrote the Da Vinci Code copied. I like the idea of the Knights hiding behind the Templars cool!!

OMG Giles bit losing his sense along with his hair you have men nailed!! Classic!!

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