because you're all that i'm not

[diamondqull]

two.

Comments

[mizra]

Wow, that's good. Amazing what pictures can help to start a story.

[diamondqull]

thank you! i love writing to pictures - it's actually more challenging, as the reader has exactly the same mental image as you, therefore you're constrained by certain things.

[alinasmith]

Wonderful! I loved the vomiting ipod - that's totally image-evocative :)

[diamondqull]

thank you! that has to be one of the more memorable similes i've ever come up with ha

[brookerepublic]

I really loved this one! You described things very well. I could picture this guy and these girls. It had a really cool vibe about it.

[diamondqull]

thank you :)