Comments | diamondqull: epilogue, seducing ms swan

diamondqull

epilogue, seducing ms swan

Jul 09, 2010 00:41

Title: Seducing Ms Swan
Summary: AU Post-New Moon. Bella never jumped, Alice never had her vision and Edward never came back. Six years later, Bella is struggling to make a new life for herself as a teacher in Rochester, New York. How will she fare when a very familiar student crops up in her classroom? Will she be able to remain professional, or ( Read more... )

fanfiction, twilight

Comments 11

kaypgirl July 9 2010, 00:37:34 UTC

Really good. I like that the identities are kinda vague until the end, makes you pay attention. And the snapshots were nice, better than a larger epilogue that only covers a scene. Really great story here, congrats on finishing it.

diamondqull July 9 2010, 18:29:54 UTC

thank you! i tried to write a traditional style epilogue & it didn't work at all, so i just let myself go and wrote what i felt. so glad you liked it! thank you for reviewing :)

gabby2253 July 9 2010, 05:41:07 UTC

I think I love yewwww. Now, ON TO READING IT! lol

gabby2253 July 9 2010, 05:48:18 UTC

Okay, so I love it! I really would like a little more convo from Jake though, but I love the snap shot idea.

I hope others will like it too!

diamondqull July 9 2010, 18:33:51 UTC

Thank yoooou!

Yeah, i kind of want a bit more jake. I'll see if I can find a way to slot in another snapshot with him. Thanks for reviewing!

x

alchemyjane July 9 2010, 22:25:26 UTC

Oh, you. <3
Lovely. Love it. I mean, wtf, it just warms me up at 1AM :)
I need cuddles!

Dude. brookerepublic July 10 2010, 00:17:41 UTC

Okay, why is it that I almost always look at this at a total random time and get a new chapter? It's total instant gratification, and it makes me so happy every time. :D

Okay, so this was really cool. I totally loved you inserted all the moments of her life into the chapter. It really pulled everything together. I'm just so sad that it's over! This really was a fantastic story. I'm almost tempted to go re-read it since it's been so long. I can't believe that I started reading this last SUMMER. Wow. The only issue that I found was that you said Jake's twins were a girl and a boy in the beginning, but then you went on to say that they were both girls? It kind of confused me.

But anyway, this story was amazing, and it's coming to a perfect end.

Thanks for the fabulous entertainment,
Brooke