[FIC] Father's Gun (72/?)

Oct 18, 2015 00:02

Title: Father's Gun ( Read more... )

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freya922 October 18 2015, 11:42:14 UTC
Fantastic chapter. John and Ellen are just perfect; I can hear their voices in my head as I read their dialogue. Loved this passage, too: "That's what happens to everyone he touches, and it doesn't matter if they're seasoned hunters or innocent civilians, doesn't matter if they're on holy ground or in a goddamn hunter's bar. They're never safe. Not if John's been there. He's the accelerant. Yellow Eyes is just lighting the match."

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diana_lucifera November 9 2015, 01:07:58 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed Ellen and John. They're a really great pair to write. Makes me want to find more opportunities soon...

Thanks for reading! :)

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dljensengirl88 October 18 2015, 21:38:42 UTC
OK Ellen was just a bit too trusting too fast for my taste. Talk about something maybe coming back to bite someone in the butt! Now I'm worried. :-(

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diana_lucifera November 9 2015, 01:07:05 UTC
Hmm, it's definitely possible that this'll come back to bite somebody somehow. We'll have to see! ;)

Thanks for reading!

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cappy712 October 19 2015, 01:50:43 UTC
What a great two chapter updates... I missed last week and caught up. Loving it so much and can't wait for the next installment.

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diana_lucifera November 9 2015, 01:06:20 UTC
Glad you enjoyed the chapters! Thanks for reading. :)

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mdlaw October 19 2015, 03:16:58 UTC
Aww Ellen, John didn't deserve to know anything about Sam and Dean. m :)

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diana_lucifera November 9 2015, 01:05:58 UTC
John and Ellen's relationship is certainly an interesting one. He's still got some of her loyalty (though maybe not her trust) whether he deserves it or not. Thanks for reading! :)

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nindevotee November 8 2015, 23:51:55 UTC
When's the next installment? I'm jonesing.

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diana_lucifera November 9 2015, 01:05:01 UTC
As if summoned by your comment, here I am with a new chapter, haha! :)

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