Part Two: What Should Have Been

[diandraxsnape]

This is Part 2 in a 10 part series titled The Explorations of The Boys of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. For series notes, please see this post. 
Title: Part Two: What Should Have Been
Rating: NC-17
Ship:  Severus/James
 Word Count: 500
Warning(s): PWP and angst throughout, rimming
Part One

It should have been hate that drew Severus to James

Comments

[demolition_luva]

[diandraxsnape]

Oh really? I do love him, though I can understand why you might not. Anywho, I'm really happy that you were able to look past it! Thanks so much for the comment :-D

[paya27]

I love the Snape stuff. He's so angsty and tragic. And I love the idea of them fighting for dominance by pleasing the other to his knees. Sexy. Well done :)

[diandraxsnape]

Oh, another Snape fan? Horray for you! I agree; the tragic side to him is just so wonderful. And I'm happy that this worked for you. Thanks for commenting!

[brighty18]

And though Severus’ goal wasn’t really to win the game, it was better than nothing.

The fact that this IS a game makes it incredibly erotic. You captured the heat/need/love/hate thing so very well.

[diandraxsnape]

Haha, I'm glad it worked for you! And I'm happy that you think I did it well. Thanks for your comment, brighty!

[midnightcrysis]

nice, i think i may be getting back into smutty fanfics :-)

[diandraxsnape]

Hehe, what good news :-D I, of course, loff the smut. Thanks for the comment!

[a_shadow_there]

I seemed to have missed this part...glad I caught it!

I really like the way you've portrayed it as a struggle for power - very sexy and dark.

Now, off to read part three...

xxx

[diandraxsnape]

Oop, I'm glad you caught it too ;-D

Thanks! That's what I love most about this pairing; it's barely love, or even tolerance for each other, it's just a power struggle in my opinion.

Thanks again for the comments!