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drake_love in dick_tim

Runaway Bird

Apr 11, 2010 20:52

Title: Runaway Bird
Pairing: Tim/Ra’s, Tim/Dick
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Slash, angst, sexual content, dub-con
Disclaimer: These characters do not in anyway belong to me (no matter how much I would like to believe it is true) and are the property of DC Comics
Author’s Comments: Yay! Finally I am done. I so many things I don’t like but it I tried to ( Read more... )

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drake_love April 13 2010, 06:26:55 UTC

*bows* Glad to be of service. ^.^ I'm happy you enjoyed it!

kirax2 April 12 2010, 12:59:03 UTC

You really took all my suggestions and ran with them! A very intense, dark story. I really like what you did with Dick's thoughts. Still love the bit about the code on the belt, Dick's ability to read Tim from the tiniest details, Dick's first touch of Tim's lips, and Ra's' voice. Excellent job!

drake_love April 13 2010, 06:20:38 UTC

Thank you! Your suggestion really made me think about what I wanted to do with the characters and how to do that. I don't know how this would have end up without you.

I'm glad I didn't scare you off. XD

darthbatgirl April 12 2010, 14:46:31 UTC

Oh . . .this this is beyond wonderful.

It's dark and kinky and . . .wow.

Just love Dick's voice in this, from worry that Tim had finally lost it to his jealously of Ra's.

And I loved how Ra's just taunts Dick with the fact that he had Tim, wonderful!

drake_love April 13 2010, 06:18:04 UTC

In my mind, (which is quite obviously a dark and kinky place ;P) Dick is so used to having Tim's attention focused on him all the time, that suddenly finding out *his* Tim has his attention elsewhere would come as a big shock to him.

I'm really glad you liked it!

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drake_love April 13 2010, 06:05:45 UTC

YAY! The dark side is pretty fun. From what I hear, they have *cookies*. :P Your Dark!Dick helped inspired this, so you totally get credit.

I would love love love to do a fic with you. I was thinking of do a sequel to this. Something of a Ra's finding out or the day after. I'm basically open to anything though. I will warn you though, I'm very new at this. This was my first fic.

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drake_love April 13 2010, 19:53:37 UTC

LOL! I feel like a kinky power ranger. :D

I don't really know what MSN each other would mean. I have two email addresses, ttpstw@gmail.com with I check most often and tallfreakstw@yahoo.com. I would *love* to help you with your idea. Give me a shout.

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drake_love April 13 2010, 06:13:25 UTC

Ah, but their issues make for good fic ideas. ^.^ Interesting that you should like that line. I wasn't sure if I should have taken it out or not. Good to know I made the right choice.

I'm really glad you liked it! Thanks for commenting!