slow burn treason

[dicktouch]

slow burn treason
♥ b.i/jinhwan
♂ pg-13
✎ 4900w
☠ none
✂ hanbin has never been much of a morning person.
☞ snapshots of hanbin’s mornings, originally written for kpop-olymfics

Comments

[concordances]

My heart ;__; I got so into this that at the end of it all I could hardly believe it was only 5k words! I think you did a wonderful job exploring what the boys go through (even though survival shows are already meant to be a peek into trainee life -- I guess that makes your fic a kind of behind-the-scenes of the behind-the-scenes), and as sad as it made me, the ending still left me with a smile on my face. I'm not even that crazy about binhwan, but this really made me root for them!

Bobby doesn’t snore anymore, and the Jinhwan he sees every day isn’t the real Jinhwan, his Jinhwan, but the person he’s supposed to sling his arm around when the director gives him a nod. THIS LINE HURT ME. But in hindsight, it was probably little things like that throughout the fic that made it so poignant. Also, the way you described hanbin feeling progressively more hopeless/defeated when he woke up each morning... Let the poor boys debut already, yg u__u

I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing!!

[hipployta]

Hanbinnie...you've worked hard kiddo

[kalopsia]

i never got around to commenting on this on olymfics cos i'm terrible >___< i thought you captured the internal struggle hanbin feels of trying to be someone so much more beyond his age really well ;___; and aaaah, the binhwan WAS SO CUTE. i love your jinhwan, he's so steady, and understanding, but most importantly:

Jinhwan crawls up over him, and it's suddenly incredibly stuffy in this room. "Jealous?"

i wanted to cry over this line since i first read the fic. it's so!!! urgh jinhwan is so aware, and also really cruel and harsh when he wants to be. i really liked how you resolved the conflict, without having an entire makeup scene? just having jinhwan wait up for hanbin, and then the IMAGERY OF HANBIN CARRYING TINY JINAN TO BED :C it was so sweet. this entire fic was so sweet. you did such a good job on it!! you should be proud n___n