Hurt/Comfort Magneto Fic: Waking

[diddymus]

Title: Waking
Author: diddymus
Claim: X-Men: Magneto
Table: Sickness Here
Prompt: Intoxication
Rating: G for everybody
Summary: A Magneto moment as told by Rogue.
Warnings: None, suitable for all
Notes: The comfort angle came around in a creepy way, which I may stick to for a while :)

Comments

[niyazi_a]

Oooooooooooooo.

Sorry, I'm not in your fandom and my Xmen knowledge is just enough that I know who's who and what's what. :C

That being said, this was a great little fic! Wonderful descriptions of Rogue's altered state, and whoa the sinister ending there. Very nice!

[diddymus]

Thankyou much! Glad you enjoyed it :)

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[ysabetwordsmith]

This was well done in terms of characterization.

However, I was rather hoping you'd gotten Magneto drunk, because that would sure be something to see! Particularly given the love/hate relationship between him and the Professor. Yeah, having your best enemy carry you out of a bar because you got too blasted to walk ... that would be a night to remember. Particularly if it was a metal bar to begin with.

Re: Feedback

[diddymus]

I toyed with the idea, but I'm really not good with drunk!fic, I have a few mild issues with alcoholism that tend to inhibit my writing in that particular area.

Thanks for reading!