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Underneath your surface, inside your veins (Oneshot)

May 22, 2010 12:42

Title: Underneath your surface, inside your veins (Oneshot)
Author: dieinthewinter
Pairing: Ryan Ross / Simon Rowlands
POV: Second, Ryan's
Bandom: Panic at the Disco, My Passion
Rating: NC-17
Beta: letogyllenhaal
Warnings: Blood Kink, Sex
Disclaimer: This isn't true (at least I think so) and I don't own them, as you might know already ;)

( And it's so beautiful. The red prickling from the fresh wounds, longing. )

my passion, pairing: ryan ross / simon rowlands, author: dieinthewinter, rating: nc-17

Comments 3

caseygoesrawr May 22 2010, 12:31:25 UTC

Oh my. I'm speechless, seriously. This was so gorgeous and beautiful it made my heart ache, but definitely in the good way ♥ Fics like this are the reason why I love fanfiction so much.

I would copy some of my favourite parts in this comment, but there are so many of them that I don't know which ones to choose. The intensity of this all blew me away like never before. But I'll try to choose a few favourite lines of mine and say what in them is so special in my opinion.

„Ryan,“ you whimper and I notice the suffering; a familiar tone that almost makes my heart crack a little. I kiss you. Gently. Some would call it loving. Because I care… About you.

That part was pure genious. I can't really explain why, but it made my heart beat a little faster than usual. Especially the two last sentences. Some would call it loving. Because I care… About you. Just perfect.

My tongue runs over your lower lip, asking for permission; even after all those times it has been allowed already.I don't know why, but that was such a powerful sentence. There ( ... )

breathedeep222 June 24 2010, 03:40:38 UTC

I have read this already, but I forgot to comment it. (bad amber)

But, I LOVE it. I think the way you described everything is so gorgeous. I loved how the whole fic felt so fagile and beatiful and strong all at the same time, even though this topic is a bit dark and gruesome to some. I like when topics like this are written with more emotion beyond the pure kink.

Granted, the pariring was unexpected, but who cares? lol.

dieinthewinter June 27 2010, 15:28:34 UTC

Don't worry, I am happy you commented at least :D Doesn't matter when!

Kinks are difficult, but this was supposed to virtualize the deepness of emotions between then, and without complimenting myself, I think it kinda worked out.

I like the pairing, especially cause they have a few things in common.

Thank you for the kind words :D