(BDS) Heliotrope 1/?, Smecker

Sep 05, 2005 03:49

Heliotrope 1 ( Read more... )

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lea_ndra September 5 2005, 17:51:03 UTC
damn, and I have no time to read it, the internet shop will close in 10 fucking minutes. damn.

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dien September 5 2005, 19:20:32 UTC
You can always read it later, hon. :P It ain't going nowhere. It will still exist when you get back home.

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guede_mazaka September 6 2005, 00:16:11 UTC
GLORIOUS.

I love your description of Murphy's uncertainty as an incomplete scale. Not only does it evoke the Irish accent, but it also references Paul's classical music love. And I adore the way you're having Smecker deal with his symptoms. He's so scientifically pathological about how he tracks the changes. Rational neurosis.

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dien September 6 2005, 02:43:28 UTC
*glee* Thank you. It's ridiculously fun to do this to Paul; vampirism (or varieties thereof) is apparently not all that different from other things that are outside his scope of reference. He just attacks them with the tools he knows, however useless that is... :P

The Murphy-voice thing just seemed to work. The Irish accent really does have a musical lilt to it; I think Smecker probably just enjoys listening to them talk some of the time.

< /unsubtle pimp >

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