I suppose I'll start this thing

Apr 10, 2005 04:43

Pairing: John/George
Author Name: George H.
Author LJ Name: georgeh
Title of story: Snowy Night
Rating of story: PG-13
Word count of story: 344
Chapter _ of _: 1 of 1
Brief summary: John and George admire the snow.
Notes: One instance of the f-word.
Notes: Written for the application needed this community. :) Requirements: include the line "glowed in the ( Read more... )

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annikaa April 11 2005, 09:12:45 UTC
I really liked this. Like Emily's response to the prompt, I enjoyed the simplicity of the fic. The description of the snow-filled street was great and I could just picture George admiring it shyly, probably a bit wary of openly expressing said admiration in front of John, haha. Plus, it's fun to imagine the snowball fight that undoudtedly ensued, the two of them all red from the cold, pale cheeks flushed and red lips chapped.

Sigh...

Plus, I love how John alternates from dismissing George and his comments to expressing an almost similar appreciation of loveliness.

A really lovely story, George.

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pigeongirl99 April 11 2005, 12:43:15 UTC
Well, I've already told you how much I like this, but you can never tell someone that enough.

I still adore George's line of "Get stuffed." And the ending is perfect, the ideas and imaginings and potential it creates- how the reader wonders what happens next.

Lovely.

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summersiren September 21 2005, 08:16:07 UTC
Cute and simple! I adore it!

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