Ok, so I posted the rest of the enormous essay.
I'd like feedback from you guys, either here, or at my LJ :)
I know that the essay is HUGE. I used copious amounts of quotes to prove my point in context.
I think it's like 135 pages long in Word.
Anyhow.....read, enjoy, and please, let me know what you think!
Here's the Essay! (That's an off-site
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loved this part...
This is the biggest threat that Ron has faced yet. If Harry and Hermione get together, he will have lost both of his targets, and he will be in the position he fears most: alone. In order to keep this from happening, he employs two methods. One is to partner Harry with someone else, and encourage that relationship, and it wouldn’t hurt his chances of continued control at all if that someone happened to be his little sister, Ginny. The other is to make Hermione unavailable to Harry and to continue to disparage her to him in order to make her seem undesirable, even unsuitable for him. For last stakes, he would take her for himself in order to keep her away from Harry, and thus secure his interests.
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I went to lunch, and when I came back, I was like....someone read it already!? I thought you were like, the fastest reader on the planet! ;)
I'd love to hear whatever feedback you have when you do get through the rest of it :)
its just a lot ot process in one sitting
lol, I know! Don't feel bad, it took me even longer to write it :)
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