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[dieselkarbon]

so im lookin through my old folders and junk... and yea, wow... found this in the archives... if anyone gets a chance, let me know what you think...

Love and FaithLoving faith, and faith in love

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[goldilox1019]

the next william shakespeare ;)
<3
stef.

[dieselkarbon]

wait till i write something that might capture a bit of you... then give me the credit ;)

[goldilox1019]

:D

[hydrolize]

Very nice. It's in all that old english stuff huh? I once wrote something like that for my English class my senior year. It went something like this....

William Shakespeare vs. Luis Moreno

Willian

To be, or not to be, that is the question:
Whether ‘tis nobler in the mind to suffer
The slings and arrows of outrageous fortune,
Or to take arms against a sea of troubles...

Luis

To grasp a thought, mid-air for natures wonder be
Glory of the universe, fable of philosophy,
An augmented vision of sea green pastures new,
All would perfection be, if only all love were true,
Radiance of charms glint upon every feature
And golden gaits that bear your porcelain creature.

Such pleasures your embrace I trip into a dream:
Drifting feathery into a flawlessness serene,
Far away from the depths of doom as we pursue
The beauty of a Tulip blossom in the summer hue,
Chronicles reflected in sunset creek and lakes
Meandering our wits, we dwell - not our mistakes.

shall we battle?

[dieselkarbon]

thats really great... i especially like lines: 5 & 6... very nice ryhme... i dont usually try to make it ryhme, id rather make it just sound like it flows, know what i mean, but reading yours makes me wanna try to do it that way lol