Preview of the story I'm working on atm because whitecake demands it ;3 Slight warning for somewhat sensitive subject matter. I'm sorry Aiden ;_; I'm so horrible to you...
You said about the warning, but you know how these things happen and I was just listening to a pretty angsty song .___. It almost made me cry (I do feel bad saying that though xD)
I love how you wrote it, how it started with all the info that builded up what was going on. And I loved how you followed it with little details and the chara not knowing what to think. --I have never lived/being close to a situation like that, but I totally bought it ^^ I'd list all the things I liked that you put together, like the recycling part, it totally fits, you know how characters are built up by what they do more what they say and he feels shocked in his actions.
I don't know, I'm just rambling, I just like giving feedback on good writing and I like you writing so I gotta spread the love. -The how to tell his friends made me smile xD --How do you do it? Put up something so good (well, I think it is) in those few words? ^^--Can we read more? Can I politely ask whitecake to demand more? ♥
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I love how you wrote it, how it started with all the info that builded up what was going on. And I loved how you followed it with little details and the chara not knowing what to think. --I have never lived/being close to a situation like that, but I totally bought it ^^ I'd list all the things I liked that you put together, like the recycling part, it totally fits, you know how characters are built up by what they do more what they say and he feels shocked in his actions.
I don't know, I'm just rambling, I just like giving feedback on good writing and I like you writing so I gotta spread the love. -The how to tell his friends made me smile xD --How do you do it? Put up something so good (well, I think it is) in those few words? ^^--Can we read more? Can I politely ask whitecake to demand more? ♥
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