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[differenceof4]

Four years ago, when we came back to China to stay with my grandparents for two months, I would occasionally wonder what my mom was doing back in Pennsylvania. When we got back, we saw that she had cut her hair, lost weight, and got toned.
I guess when you don't have three kids to worry about, you have a lot more time on your hands to do things for

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[astrolatryae]

i like this a lot.

[astrolatryae]

Have you thought about submitting this as a college essay? Was it written with that in mind? Because I surfed my friends page again, and this is really striking. You should use it.

[differenceof4]

That's what Yi said. And not really.