when love has another life

[difusion]

Title: When Love Has Another Life
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos.
WordCount: 1334
Disclaimer: We'll never know.
A/N: Just one of those fics you find and finish and wonder, wait, what?

Comments

[baronessbadger]

(OHMYFUCKINGODITSMYFAVORIIIIIIIITE)

DAMMIT, YOU SON OF A BITCH. I'M CRYING!

You know why.

♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

In all seriousness though, I've told you a million times how much I love the texture of your writing and I love how quiet and soft and pretty this is and I just. I repeat myself but it's because it's just so. fucking. lovely.

thanks. I really needed this today.

[crombieeagle872]

OHMYGOD LOVE!

This was so hott. I love Sergio's tenderness with Nando in the beginning and how Nando was still shy little freckled Nino in bed, but still like.. sluttyish.

The ending totally got me :(
Ouch. Poor Nando.

Awesome writing!

[kissmecait17]

This is beautiful. I love just the feel of it and how it flows. It feels incredibly natural and I think that just proves what a great writer you are. And it is easy too, to understand the love and familiarity and tenderness and then see how it flips to something so terribly sad.

This: to battle a heart with keening questions that he doesn't know how to answer. The dreams, he never knows how to answer them, so he cries, always.

[falafhel]

But-but! I was all like: oh, something happy, nice and lovely is just what i need to start my day and then you pull that?!
It was great though! Really well written (like always) and really heart breaking!

[thopix]

I really didn't expect that end! It was so hot and they seemed to fit so well.Anyway great job!