fake clouds, but true

Aug 27, 2011 20:12

Title: Fake Clouds, But True
Rating: R
Pairing: Sergio Ramos/Fernando Torres
Wordcount: 336
Disclaimer: We'll never know.
Note: This was created by wine.

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sergio ramos, fanfiction, fernando torres

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baronessbadger August 28 2011, 01:31:54 UTC
love
<4

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sumrndmgrl August 28 2011, 01:37:20 UTC
I love how descriptive yet abstract it is. A few key words hint at their situation or emotions but a lot can be created or inferred by the reader. Good job!

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notoriousjk August 28 2011, 18:16:06 UTC
holy shit this was good.

I'll echo the previous commenter & say I love the abstractness of this piece the most- with so few words the reader can infer so much.

drink old white wine more often ;-)

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vitaminbjorner August 28 2011, 20:56:42 UTC

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brontok September 5 2011, 01:56:47 UTC
ah wine, wish you could be as generous to me too (I always fall asleep), but this is so poetic and beautiful and symbolic, I can't even

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