ambahan for lit class

[dilang_banyaga]

i suck at writing. but heres an attempt at an ambahan for lit class. if it sucks, tell me. i have till monday to fix it, or scrap it and come up with another one

Comments

[onelast_sunset]

What's an "ambahan"?

[dilang_banyaga]

its supposed to be the filipino version of japan's haiku...
only specifications are 7 syllables per line and ummm... its supposed to be metaphorical to a certain extent...

[_azia]

is it supposed to be in english or tagalog?

anyway, it's okay. but it's not very symbolic or metaphorical, i think it's still a bit too direct to the point.

[dilang_banyaga]

it can be either... hehe. made another attempt... i think its more metaphorical sounding(?) thanx for the comment though!