fic: fire on babylon

Jan 15, 2011 20:58

So, this is for twirlycurl's prompt at ohsam's fic meme challenge: Sam is conviced that as soon as he dies, he's headed straight back to hell. Cas convinces him otherwise ( Read more... )

genfic, spnfic

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borgmama1of5 January 16 2011, 03:03:18 UTC
Wow. Speechless, akin to the feeling of being hit with a two by four. Because I'm not completely sure what's going on between the boys, but I hurt for Sam and damn, I'm glas Cas is there for him!

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dime_for_12 January 16 2011, 03:14:00 UTC
yay, thank you for the lovely feedback.

As for the boys - I was only thinking of the typical stuff between them - they have a lot to deal with. Mostly it's just Dean trying to figure out how to see past everything, and Sam learning how to wait.

Seriously, I'm just :DDDDDDD all over the place!

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harrigan January 16 2011, 03:40:57 UTC
I generally don't read stories where the h/c pair contains Cas instead of Dean or Sam. But I do have to tell you that this was so well-written, I'm glad I did!

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dime_for_12 January 16 2011, 03:54:02 UTC
wow, thank you so much, I'm glad it was worth the read!

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vail_kagami January 16 2011, 11:51:50 UTC
Fantastic and chilling story. I have a soft spot for Cas taking care of Sam.
The relationship between Sam and Dean feels very fifth season to me, and that's breaking my heart.

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dime_for_12 January 16 2011, 17:44:54 UTC
I always love your comments, btw. They make me smile :D

Since this was post s5, I really wanted that kind of ... absolute despair/hurt that marked the last season, so \o/ win for me, I guess LOL

I'm so happy you liked this, and thanks for the f/b C:

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twirlycurls January 16 2011, 16:58:46 UTC
Thank you so much for this! I really enjoyed it, and your Cas voice is very nice. So is the interactions between the characters, both the humorous and the serious. So nice. :)

"You saved us all. You suffered so that we could live. You are a righteous, deserving man."

Very very nice.

He can't explain why, though, when he asks about Lisa, and Dean grins so wide and helplessly, his heart breaks a little at the sight.

I love this line and I'm right there with Sammy on this one.

Sam cracks an eye open, sees leather jackets and trenchcoats over stiff shoulders, faces turned away from him and sizing each other up in ways that Sam would consider eyefucking if it didn't look so close to potential homicide.

This made me giggle and squee at the same time.

Thank you so much! :)

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dime_for_12 January 16 2011, 17:49:55 UTC
... your Cas voice is very nice...

oh, thank god! haha, no I was worried to the point where I hate writing him because I don't think I can, so that was a relief.

Also, ALSO:

... both the humorous and the serious.

This made me squee so loud. I know this came out angsty and a bit sad, maybe, but I'm glad you picked up on the humor. (I'm trying for light-hearted, and I'll get there. Eventually).

And quotes, you gave me quotes. The funny thing is - the lines you picked out are some of my favorite, too :D

I'm glad you liked. Really, really glad.

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cece_away January 20 2011, 17:22:55 UTC
Touching that Sam hears forgiven and redemption in Cas's voice, and that Cas really wants to help Sam.

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