You know how

[dimitri_aidan]

Sometimes you go through many many version of an idea before you get one that you decide to share? Well, today is "Rejected shit theater!" :P Why you ask? Because I'm hoping that seeing it in another forum will help me see what I don't like and then revise. Usually I print out and attack with a red ink pen, crosing out, writting over, and stiching

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[rain_86]

hey, both awesome stories but i'm definitely partial to the AoA one.

sinister's always been my fave villain so it's nice to see him being used somewhere. that last crack he made about teddy was awesome. loved billy being all protective of tommy too but poor vic :(

so are these standalones or the start of a new series? either way, they've both got a lot of potential

[dimitri_aidan]

These are ideas, which I decided must be modified before I post them for real, for my 100_AU table. Both will be series of five-ten chapters, hopefully, once I'm satisfied with them.

And yes, poor Vic. And Cassie. And everyone else I'm killing off in AoA. I'm a bad person.

[mechante_fille]

Ooh, cheat sheet link! Thanks for that

[dimitri_aidan]

I blame public school education for my inablity to spell physically vs psychically. (Or defiantly vs definitely, though I've gotten a wee bit better of picking out that one on my own. The 'a' usually tips me off.) Sinister is quite the freaky perv isn't he? As always I disturbed myself just a touch writting him because...well, its weird. Building people because your 'son' can't pick out a guy you approve of..eh. Still, its Billy and Tommy...only you know, not. They've been dubbed Witch and ecimation for the time being.

You may need to protect me from rightious fangirl indignation. Victor, Teddy's boyfriend, is quite the fan favorite and...well, I killed Cassie too, I think. I'm sure there will be hell to pay.

Thomas has indeed hit on the Zombies but I don't think he means it. They usually lung for his throat and he shoots them.

But, as far as the first one goes, I've just written something that goes before it as my way of editing. ^-^

[mechante_fille]

I am so there for you! All 5 feet and 2 inches of me will keep the rabid fangirls from knocking down your door and having their way with you beating you senseless. Don't know why they'd be so worked up, there are still Twins! Glad you are working more on it!

Yeah, Thomas... that still just goes with the crazy. But Will did warn us of that factor...

Hm... maybe I should get you Hooked on Phonics... (Phonics starts with a F sound, just like physical! ^_^) But, I certainly don't mind looking out for those sneaky words when beta-ing, so no worries, there! Anytime.