All in Vain; Jonghyun/Onew

[onew]

All in Vain
705 words. PG.
- SHINee; Jonghyun/Onew.

author onew
summary There is a reason why Jinki trips on his own feet (other than his being innately clumsy).
notes written for the 15-minute challenge @ kpfw 9.0.

Comments

[volatileflame]

cute X3

[salted_taiyaki]

hrk I don't ship JongYu but I kinda couldn't resist reading this [since I've read one of your stories before and blar blar ramble]

ahh this was way too cute for me in the morning lksjf ♥ Mr. Cool, totally failing in the presence of Jonghyun, I can totally see that. And those numbers, oh god, ha ha. I love the progression of their relationship, it was so...I dunno, natural? /ramble
Also I love the word "peal." I don't know. It just sounds lovely. Anyway, thank you very much for sharing ~~ ♥

[chikaichix]

That was so cute, OMG.

I now ship JongYu. ♥

[silverlaces]

This was so sweet ♥

[dailysky]

hahaha, this is always how i pictured jinki in school, all nerdy and goofy yet somehow charismatic enough to get everyone to fall for him.

there are some minor spelling errors/left out words though, should i point them out?

[onew]

i'll just run through the entire fic again ^^; wasn't able to do a spelling and grammar check. my fail, it transcends ;;