Fic: Little Secrets [2/?] (Glee, Rachel/Quinn)

[disasteral_boys]

Title: Little Secrets
Author: disasteral_boys
Fandom: Glee
Paring: Rachel/Quinn
Rating: R (For swearing and angst)
Length: 3093
Spoilers: 1x20 Theatricality
Disclaimer: I don't own anything
Summary: Angst. Quinn Fabray is happy living a lie until High School ends. That is, until someone finds out.
Author's Note: As always, I'd love to hear your

Comments

[disasteral_boys]

They are evil :(

Thank you :D

[madndizzee]

Poor Quinn. I'm glad Rachel was the one that found her. So... I don't suppose the person Quinn talked to on the helpline was one of Rachel's dads?

[disasteral_boys]

I hadn't thought of that! It could have been one of Rachel's dads but the helpline is anonymous so Quinn probably won't find out who she spoke to.

Thanks for reading :)

[miss_darkmoon]

This was deliciously sad :D I can't wait to read the next part!!

And because I liked it so much...

As she got closer, the cries got louder and Rachel felt her own tears rising to her eyes because the cries were just so tortured.
- this part would read better if you changed one of the 'cries' to something else, even 'the sounds' instead, or something.

Also, you have Karofsky's bank at one point instead of his back.

And "Thank you." Quinn said simply" - the 'simply' there is unnecessary description and it would read better without it.

... and all of that is honestly just because I really like this story so far :D

Loved Quinn calling the helpline, and I loved the descriptions of her (and descriptions of her emotions) in and out of the dumpster (like, after the dumpster). Also, great set up with Rachel being there for her :D Can't wait to see what happens with that when Quinn comes out or is forced out...

[disasteral_boys]

Thanks :D

And thank you for the tips and such, I really need a beta because after reading through a fic how ever many times, I fail to notice those things!

Thanks for reading, too :)

[miss_darkmoon]

You're welcome! :)

And you're welcome again! Yeah, posting something pretty soon after writing it is difficult... I write original fiction right now so I'm pretty secure in the fact that I'm going back to rewrite the entirety of my pieces later when I've had time away from them, but... the net is obviously faster than that xD

You're very welcome! And man, I would love to beta some of this story xD I already have another story I'm supposed to be looking over this month, but... lol. Exciting fic is exciting :)

[thatissodawn]

Oh my gosh. I just want to hurt those guys.

I love how concerned, understanding and caring Rachel was. So sad. Hug her some more, Rachel!