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[disco_adventure]

Oh sweet girl

Your heart is precious and your spirit soars

To heights the dreamers have only seen

My desire for you consumes me

To know your heart

And discover your soul

Your eyes are kind, sweet, honest

They are your soul’s gates

That you have so gently raised

Allowing me explore

I long to kiss the crimson tears of your past

In hopes that

Comments

[kosta_pasta]

I say " are you published, yet?" almost every time I read your new poems. I swear, your writing is soo touching. If I found the correct word for your writings. I love it.

[clark_inda_dark]

I agree with the person before me. Your writing is very touching and deep. You say so clearly what it is you're feeling by mixing point-blank words in with words dressed by gorgeous methaphors.

[disco_adventure]

Katrina and Valerie, you girls are too kind! :-)

[joothemoo]

But seriously, have you ever published anything? Cause I want book of your poems :D
things like your poetry make English a beautiful language