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Dec 16, 2004 22:16

crushed like a paper cup
being folded into an origami treat
this soul cries
tearing it appart to reveal a void
that may be filled by many
but all lack substance
and thirst thus quenched
by divinity

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acouplehymns December 19 2004, 02:21:10 UTC
as always, i missed your writing.
DO IT MORE. NOW.
:-*!

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disco_steek December 19 2004, 08:26:28 UTC
does that mean this poem was of quality?
we will see...

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acouplehymns December 19 2004, 20:49:03 UTC
yes, it was of quality.

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SKEET SKEET roobusta January 6 2005, 12:39:17 UTC
Shane that rocked... and you lika tha cock. I had to say that cause it rhymed. I gotta get out to Phoenix dammit, or better yet you gotta grab your surfboard and come out here! peace

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Re: SKEET SKEET disco_steek January 26 2005, 04:49:35 UTC
your picture should just be of you naked in your old school element shirt from CRAS. bring it back tim...if you still have it. then again, how could you get rid of such a relic?

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Re: SKEET SKEET roobusta January 26 2005, 07:42:50 UTC
oh dude I totally got it. I could wear those purple panties I found in my laundry too

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peanutbutter roobusta January 6 2005, 12:43:46 UTC
is that ashley? and ALSO add me to your friends list you i like pudding...

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Re: peanutbutter acouplehymns January 26 2005, 21:56:54 UTC
it isssss

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Re: roobusta January 26 2005, 22:27:28 UTC
oh ma goodness, it is you. well hey it's tim, if you couldn't tell from my awesome picture. skeet

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acouplehymns January 26 2005, 23:58:55 UTC
i know it's you. shane told me on the phone yesterday. :) you're right, awesome picture :) haha take care.

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