What a lovely story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, even if you had me going with the first two paragraphs. I was sure you couldn't let Bodie marry Doyle's sister, but it sounded like that at first.
This is great. I love how you make it appear one thing first, before showing us the real situation, very cleverly done. All this stuff hidden, made known as you read. Very romantic and very enjoyable. Thanks!
What a lovely read! I enjoy reading stories from Doyle´s perspective and you did a great job explaining his reasons and his feelings for Bodie. Thank you!
I loved this! So romantic, but still their snarky, laddy selves. And I'm rather taken with Rebecca too - she seems perfect as Doyle's sister and a most observant woman. *g*
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Thank you for a lovely read.
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Thanks so much for reading. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it!
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Really enjoyed reading this - thanks.
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