Discovered At A Wedding: Something More

Jun 25, 2009 19:38

Here's my little offering for the "Wedding" challenge.

Something More )

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sc_fossil June 26 2009, 01:18:40 UTC
It's such a nice, romantic story, C. I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for letting me help. It's always a pleasure to read one of your offerings.

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ankaree June 26 2009, 01:31:54 UTC
Awww, thanks, Kat! You always do a great job helping me with my stories! *hugs*

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sunray45 June 26 2009, 04:37:55 UTC
What a lovely story. I thoroughly enjoyed it, even if you had me going with the first two paragraphs. I was sure you couldn't let Bodie marry Doyle's sister, but it sounded like that at first.

Thank you for a lovely read.

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ankaree June 28 2009, 01:15:24 UTC
Hehe! I thought it would be fun to be a little sneaky at the beginning *g*

Thanks so much for reading. I'm pleased that you enjoyed it!

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tango65 June 26 2009, 04:40:00 UTC
This is great. I love how you make it appear one thing first, before showing us the real situation, very cleverly done. All this stuff hidden, made known as you read. Very romantic and very enjoyable. Thanks!

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ankaree June 28 2009, 01:16:39 UTC
Awww, thank you for the wonderfull comments! I'm so glad that you enjoyed my story!

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biani June 26 2009, 12:21:31 UTC
What a lovely read! I enjoy reading stories from Doyle´s perspective and you did a great job explaining his reasons and his feelings for Bodie. Thank you!

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ankaree June 28 2009, 01:23:35 UTC
Thanks so much for taking the time to read my story! I really appreciate you nice comments!

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norfolkdumpling June 27 2009, 09:45:32 UTC
I loved this! So romantic, but still their snarky, laddy selves. And I'm rather taken with Rebecca too - she seems perfect as Doyle's sister and a most observant woman. *g*

Really enjoyed reading this - thanks.

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ankaree June 28 2009, 01:31:13 UTC
Thank you for the wonderful comments! I'm glad you enjoyed the romance I put into the story and that you liked Rebecca. I had fun writing her :)

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