Old Dogs And Older Tricks

Feb 24, 2009 19:12

Title: Old Dogs And Older Tricks
Prompt: the Things They Learned
Words: 100
Points: the Watch

First came Keel.

A few watchmen who'd known him outlived the lilac. He hadn't been much of a teacher, but from him they'd learned, good and hard, what it was to be a copper. They'd learned underhanded blows, an outdated oath, where to buy muffles for their ( Read more... )

challenge: the things they learned

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roruna February 25 2009, 03:45:34 UTC
.... *weeps uncontrollable*

*like a baby. like a hungry, angry baby.*

that was just so... beautiful and sad and... gut wrenching and... *weeps more*

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gogollescent February 25 2009, 23:58:56 UTC
...was it that sad?

Well, good, I guess.

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roruna February 26 2009, 01:19:19 UTC
It was a moving piece of art, child. *reads it again and weeps without shame.*

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gogollescent February 26 2009, 03:35:13 UTC
Duly noted.

...did you just call me child? Can I go back to being mongoose now? Child is slightly worrisome, I have to tell you.

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gogollescent February 25 2009, 23:59:04 UTC
Thank you. :)

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evilstorm February 25 2009, 11:58:46 UTC
Oh. Awwww.

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gogollescent February 25 2009, 23:59:39 UTC
I dub this the Pleasing Interjections Comment.

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evilstorm February 26 2009, 01:13:12 UTC
Hee. I have personally always maintained that interjections can convey heaps and heaps of meaning; it's a good way to write a short review that nevertheless concisely tells the author just how you felt.

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gogollescent February 26 2009, 03:34:20 UTC
'Nnnnngh' is a personal favorite.

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gogollescent February 26 2009, 00:02:49 UTC
Thank you very much!

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deathbyshinies February 25 2009, 20:28:54 UTC
*sniff* Aw. This is horrible, but awesome at the same time. Thanks.

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gogollescent February 26 2009, 00:03:12 UTC
BEST COMPLIMENT EVER.

Give me your nasties, give me your horribles... *sings*

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