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Apr 21, 2005 19:18

It's contest time!

I have some random little objets and they'd make a good care package. You want?

Comment with a haiku poem about milk. The winning poem will receive a haiku from me and a care package.

Guidelines:

A haiku is a short japonese poem. It has three lines. They can be of varying length, as long as there is an odd number of syllables, with ( Read more... )

contest, text-only, updated, mediocre poetry

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dishwater April 22 2005, 03:33:16 UTC
use by date
beckoning at me
drink splash bake soak slurp mix milk

grim monsters
who can satisfy their shouts?
mother's milk

those sunday eyes
reading the sign on dutch street
ten cent milk bottle

no one drinks milk in london
it is gross.
whims of the mindless.

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dishwater April 22 2005, 12:55:51 UTC
#2 is called babies

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dishwater April 22 2005, 04:36:37 UTC
milk
it is color
it is skin it is magic

and i don't love you no more
and i don't
drink milk with you in the shade

the film left
from the milk glass; inching up
it needs to escape

mind over matter
but what in your mind
is above milk in your tum

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dishwater April 22 2005, 05:04:58 UTC
bubbles like velvet
a deep brown stains seeps
a lovely cappucino

steam runs in and out
repositioning
don't forget to bleed the wand

gathering at the bottom
of the pail
the mornings milk is bashful

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anonymous April 22 2005, 06:39:00 UTC
dishwater April 22 2005, 12:52:51 UTC
it counts indeed. please except my compliments.

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anonymous April 25 2005, 21:48:14 UTC
dishwater April 27 2005, 00:14:55 UTC
two questions:

what size t-shirt do you wear [adult size XS-XXL :)]?

-and-

I don't remember.

Your package will be shipped no later than thursday, april 28th. Please allow a little bit of time for shipping. Whoop it up. You've won something!!

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smurfettebleu April 22 2005, 07:03:46 UTC
damn 12:03...i'm back at haikus anyway

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dishwater April 22 2005, 12:51:33 UTC
it's midnight tomorrow, shawnie.

but no pressure.

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