Hunchback of notre dame, frollo torturing and raping phoebus (graphical), cursing him because frollo feels attracted to him, wants him to burn with esmeralda. clopin watching, comforting phoebus afterwards.
The dungeons where the gypsy men were kept was dark, cold and damp. It hadn’t felt so severe when they’d first brought them down, but now the group of men sat huddled together, slapping their arms for warmth
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“How was your night?” He asked, his voice as maddeningly deadpan as ever. “We have many things to discuss, you and I, and as much time as nessecary to talk about them
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“I have been expecting M’sieur Clopin for quite some time now,” Frollo said, patting the gypsy’s cheek. “Our King of the Truands has quite a long history, and all of his deeds have some punishment assigned them. Unfortunately, I can’t prove his connection to all of them, so clever is our friend, and we haven’t got the time to go through them all, anyway. Rest assured, old friend, God has seen all- even the crimes you commit outside our fair city, across France, and he will punish the wicked
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Frollo grabbed Clopin’s face and threw him towards a wall. “I should take your lying tongue and melt it from your mouth! What would you do without it, I wonder? Bulk up and die from the unspoken poison of your words
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Re: pt 6/6 SHUT UP I AM GOOD AT NUMBERS
anonymous
June 10 2010, 14:37:54 UTC
Okay, I hate torture, but I read this the whole way through in spite of that and this is just... WOW. I love what you did at the end with Clopin using the puppet to comfort Phoebus -- the puppet is so light-hearted and silly and cute yet the idea of a man carrying on a conversation with himself is almost dark and disturbing and insane. The duality there is just awesome. And the Hansel & Gretel allegory!
This is truly inspired. I really liked it. I was like, "Ugh, oh god," at the violent parts, but they helped make the ending even more powerful.
Re: pt 6/6 SHUT UP I AM GOOD AT NUMBERSa_madeye_moodySeptember 17 2010, 11:04:25 UTC
LOVED THIS! It was awesome!!!! Very well written and am actually late for work cause I decided to read through it lols... Seriously loved this! Caught the human element perfectly! Utterly enjoyed this! Thank you for writing it!
Re: pt 6/6 SHUT UP I AM GOOD AT NUMBERSthisismsmercyJune 28 2011, 03:18:45 UTC
How have I managed to not read this before now?! The dialogue was especially fantastic- all of it, but especially Frollo's. The use of the puppet was absolutely heartbreaking, and quite disturbing. This has to be one of my favourite fills out of all of these. It's going to stay with me for a long time. Not OP, but thankyou so much for this fill, I really did love it.
I'd kill for that one
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The world needs some good Frollo/Phoebus crack. It's only logical.
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This is truly inspired. I really liked it. I was like, "Ugh, oh god," at the violent parts, but they helped make the ending even more powerful.
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I read a whole bunch of these fills yesterday but this is the one that stuck in my mind.
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The dialogue was especially fantastic- all of it, but especially Frollo's. The use of the puppet was absolutely heartbreaking, and quite disturbing.
This has to be one of my favourite fills out of all of these. It's going to stay with me for a long time. Not OP, but thankyou so much for this fill, I really did love it.
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