Who Dares to Disappoint {1/3} REPOST for HTML FailafterandalasiaApril 19 2011, 11:34:18 UTC
Title: Who Dares to Disappoint Fandom: Snow White Pairing: Evil Queen/Huntsman Rating: Adult Wordcount: 1,952
Summary: There are few or none who would dare to disappoint the Queen. When her Huntsman does so, she determines that revenge is in order, and decides to ensure that it is thorough.
"Fool!"
Her nails rake down his cheek, leaving lines of blood in their wake.
"Imbecile!"
The back of her hand across the other side of his face.
"WeaklingFingers, slender and pale but with a grip like steel, take hold of his chin and push his head back, tilting his eyes towards the ceiling, pressing the back of his head against the wall. The flat of a knife is pressed against his neck, so cold that it almost burns, sliding up over his Adam's apple until the edge is just beneath his chin
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Who Dares to Disappoint {2/3}afterandalasiaApril 19 2011, 11:34:54 UTC
In her absence he is moved to another room, this time a bedchamber. He is shaved, groomed, stripped and bound, bent over the foot of the bed with his legs spread, utterly exposed. He can see some sort of case bought into the room by two servants and set down, but it is not opened, and he waits in trembling terror for the door to open and her to enter
( ... )
Who Dares to Disappoint {3/3}afterandalasiaApril 19 2011, 11:35:32 UTC
She slides into him, and he cries out at the sudden stretching of his flesh, trying to pull away from her. A dark laugh sounds behind him, and strong fingers wrap around his hips. He bites down on the fabric beneath him as she thrusts into him over and over again, so hard that her hips against his bruised ass send fresh throbs of pain through him, so rough that he lingers constantly on the edge of pain. Her nails dig into his flesh and she scours lines down his sides, then he feels scratching on his back and shoulders and his back is afire. But still his body betrays him, and with each thrust his erect cock is pushed against the fabric of the coverlet, engorged and aching, the fabric rough against the sensitive flesh
( ... )
Re: Who Dares to Disappoint {3/3}guiltyhousewifeApril 20 2011, 15:03:14 UTC
Why is she so evil????? And why are you so evil to depict her as so evil??? Here's how good your narrative voice is: upon reading about the wooden phallus, I got a little scared, and it wasn't even for me. Poor huntsman-guy. It's pretty complex, being attracted to the person who is about to kill you. Yikes.
Evil Queen/Huntsman
After finding out that he DIDN'T kill Snow White, the Evil Queen takes her anger out on the Huntsman.
Sexually. (Non-con.)
Then she kills him.
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Fandom: Snow White
Pairing: Evil Queen/Huntsman
Rating: Adult
Wordcount: 1,952
Summary: There are few or none who would dare to disappoint the Queen. When her Huntsman does so, she determines that revenge is in order, and decides to ensure that it is thorough.
"Fool!"
Her nails rake down his cheek, leaving lines of blood in their wake.
"Imbecile!"
The back of her hand across the other side of his face.
"WeaklingFingers, slender and pale but with a grip like steel, take hold of his chin and push his head back, tilting his eyes towards the ceiling, pressing the back of his head against the wall. The flat of a knife is pressed against his neck, so cold that it almost burns, sliding up over his Adam's apple until the edge is just beneath his chin ( ... )
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Here's how good your narrative voice is: upon reading about the wooden phallus, I got a little scared, and it wasn't even for me. Poor huntsman-guy. It's pretty complex, being attracted to the person who is about to kill you. Yikes.
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