PRIDE, Simba/Kovu [1/2]
anonymous
June 30 2010, 23:20:58 UTC
The moon had hardly moved in the sky when Simba reemerged from the cave Kovu has been refused entrance to, for fear of what he would do to the lionesses or with the hope something would attack him when he is left unprotected in the night--or both. Kovu, full of restlessness, was on his feet immediately, wary
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PRIDE, Simba/Kovu [2/2]
anonymous
June 30 2010, 23:22:03 UTC
The fourth time Simba mounted him, he gave him no more resistance; rather than standing when he saw him emerge from among the rocks, he arranged himself in the position a permissive lioness took. As much of the king's seed that there was now inside of him the penetration was easier to bear, though the removal caused the usual raking pain
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Re: PRIDE, Simba/Kovu [2/2]
anonymous
July 1 2010, 06:18:11 UTC
Okay, I originally requested this and I have to say, thank you so much!!! So glad you picked up this prompt, mystery writer. ♥ To be honest, this was SO incredibly written and I wasn't expecting it to be filled at all, let alone this...ideally.
Everything was exactly, extremely perfect. It fit in with the context of the movie, and it was so accurate to actual lion behavior, and I just love it. :D
And you kept it in character too, omg. With Kovu battling his arrogance to complete his mission, and Simba just owning Kovu and his rights as the king. When Kovu carefully restrained himself and submitted the fourth time around it was a perfect mirror to his behavior in the movie when he was trying to work his way into Simba's trust. So sneaky. So Kovu. ♥
Thank you again, Mystery Writer!! I love this so much. :]
And now I really wish there was more TLK fanfiction....
Re: PRIDE, Simba/Kovu [2/2]
anonymous
July 1 2010, 06:35:25 UTC
...Triple commenting, new low, but whatever. I'd also like to add that I love how you got into the lion-ness of the act. And that you wrote Kovu and Simba as real lions, with all of their actions and reactions having a basis in real life behaviors.
They didn't read as just humans with four legs and fur, and I loved it. If that makes sense.
Re: PRIDE, Simba/Kovu [2/2]
anonymous
July 1 2010, 09:31:10 UTC
lol, don't apologize for commenting; it's great to know the original requester loved the fill. Much better than getting no response. <3
I actually spent an hour googling lion sex, and when I found out they mate upwards 40 times a day, I couldn't NOT write this. *kinks hard for coming-back-for-more*
Mmmmf. When Simba kept coming back for more and I realized that you were going to write them as LIONS--- that was awesome. Best part was Simba's warning, starting with "This is what it will be like." That was cruel and controlling and PERFECT. Really, you captured the dynamic of their relationship brilliantly. The powerplay in this was intense.
This was a really, really great fill. Thanks so much for sharing! <3
Re: PRIDE, Simba/Kovu [2/2]
anonymous
July 3 2010, 19:33:38 UTC
GODDDDDDDD THIS WAS HOT. I didn't think I'd be so into The Lion King fanfiction, but WOW. Simba double-dipping (nine times dipping, actually!!) was ridiculously hot. I can't help but imagining an AU where Kovu winds up taking his place at Pride Rock to take care of Simba's, uh, needs. :D :D
I don't guess you would write any more Simba/Kovu? Not even necessarily smutty! Although I won't lie, it would be hot. :P
WHY DO I WANT THIS. >:| but hey, if it helps apparently lions actually get up to this sort of thing in the wild! legit.../shamed
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Everything was exactly, extremely perfect. It fit in with the context of the movie, and it was so accurate to actual lion behavior, and I just love it. :D
And you kept it in character too, omg. With Kovu battling his arrogance to complete his mission, and Simba just owning Kovu and his rights as the king. When Kovu carefully restrained himself and submitted the fourth time around it was a perfect mirror to his behavior in the movie when he was trying to work his way into Simba's trust. So sneaky. So Kovu. ♥
Thank you again, Mystery Writer!! I love this so much. :]
And now I really wish there was more TLK fanfiction....
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They didn't read as just humans with four legs and fur, and I loved it. If that makes sense.
Sorry for commenting so much! D:
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I actually spent an hour googling lion sex, and when I found out they mate upwards 40 times a day, I couldn't NOT write this. *kinks hard for coming-back-for-more*
I'm very glad you liked the fic, OP!
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Mmmmf. When Simba kept coming back for more and I realized that you were going to write them as LIONS--- that was awesome. Best part was Simba's warning, starting with "This is what it will be like." That was cruel and controlling and PERFECT. Really, you captured the dynamic of their relationship brilliantly. The powerplay in this was intense.
This was a really, really great fill. Thanks so much for sharing! <3
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I don't guess you would write any more Simba/Kovu? Not even necessarily smutty! Although I won't lie, it would be hot. :P
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I love how you went the distance and slipped it in a place where it could add to the storyline, plus based it on lion behavior!
I just want you to know anon, I love you and this will be in my twisted little mind and heart as secret canon <3
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