Fandom: Beauty & the Beast, Kinks: D/s, M/F/M threesometarnishedangel2March 20 2011, 23:45:43 UTC
I just found this community yesterday by doing a search for Tangled fics. I've been reading practically all weekend. I LOVE this place!!! SQUEE
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Bee sat by the fire, drinking a cup of tea and nibbling a little chocolate biscuit. Outside the rain smashed against the window and the wind ripped through the trees. It was early afternoon, but the room was dark. In front of her, in the middle of the room, her husband was gruesomely fucking the rope bound Puppy. The ropes were pulled tight. The plush, scarlet texture didn't cause any discomfort, but it didn't allow any chance of escaping either. Bee observed the way Puppy's muscles moved with the hard thrusts, the way he opened and closed his eyes, at times staring blankly to a spot somewhere far off, sometimes snapping back to reality. There was clear moments of pleasure, then another moments of utter disbelief. To Bee's delight, the pleasure side seemed to be winning. Bee knew from first hand experience that Beast had more vigor and stamina than any human male, so she just hoped Puppy wouldn't pass out before Beast was finished. That would disappoint them both
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Beast grabbed her legs and turned her to him, propping her legs up against his shoulders, her pussy in perfect position for his first, powerful thrust. Bee moaned and smiled up at him, suddenly overwhelmed by the love she had for him
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The image of "Berus" all spread open and on display for his Master and Mistress is YUMMY sigh inducing. That's just a delicious picture that you have painted. I like how you use canine imagery when "Berus" is lapping Belle, and the line about Beast "towering above them" while he takes "Berus" earns another YUMMY sigh!!! *yep, still drooling over Beast* LOL!!! ; ) I smiled when I read about Belle uttering an "elegant cry" when she reached her peak. That sounds like Belle.
I also LOVE that you were able to incorporate my second request into this story. I know that I asked for a lot, but you delivered it. The image of "Berus" taking Belle while Beast takes him is the sexiest and HOTTEST moment in this entire fic. SQUEE!!! : )
All in all, this was a GREAT read!!! THANK YOU again, Anon author!!! : )
I like how you set the stage for "Puppy"'s breaking in by Beast. The darkened room in the castle, the stormy weather outside, and inside Beast is forcing "Puppy" to submit and admit that he really enjoys being taken even though he is shocked by this discovery. This is an altogether HOT, sexy, and enlightening scene. *drools over Beast* Belle's contemplation over the moment is good too. : )
It's nice to see that "Puppy" is starting to respond to his training as evidenced by his no longer needing to be supervised during his use of the depilatory agents.
I LOVE Belle's teasing and taunting!!! I LOVE how she displays herself like a treat and denies "Puppy"!!! I also LOVE how she once again attacks Gaston's pride by telling him that she "belong[s]" to Beast, and he is a better lover than Gaston will ever be.
Re: Scrap the previous question, I think I got it all in one story...tarnishedangel2April 28 2011, 10:51:29 UTC
Hello, Anon
First, my apologies for taking a month to respond to this post. Second, THANK YOU so MUCH for writing my prompt. I do appreciate it, and I think that you captured it very well. : ) I understand referring to Gaston as "Puppy". Most subs have a pet name, but I was confused about Belle's "Bee" unless that is Beast's pet name for her because he is the Dom in their relationship.
As for this portion of the fic, I LOVE how you base the training on canine/lupine pack hierarchy in order to train Gaston. Belle's comment when Beast becomes unnerved by her training methods gave me a chuckle (heehee), and Beast's "Exhaust him, good and proper" earns a YUMMY sigh. I did feel for "Puppy" when he was sheared and waxed, but Gaston's pride is his biggest problem, and even though I like the chest hair, this issue needed to be dealt with in this manner. GOOD job!!! Now, onto to the next chapter.
*stares at all the wonderful feedback* Wow, thank you! I haven't had this much feedback since...never! (and the only time I've posted as anon in here, isn't that ironic or what :D)
Anyway, sorry about that Belle's nickname, I obviously edited too harshly, there was this bit of the story where Beast referred to Belle as his Queen Bee - it didn't add much to the story, so I cut it, except leaving the whole nickname itself. Eh, oops?
I do like to tell you that I wrote this whole story in only few days, so thank you for the great prompt that caused the plot bunny to attack - it was great fun writing this! And I'm happy I did justice to your vision, and you liked the story :)
YAY!!! You found my comments. : ) I was afraid because it had been a while since you posted the story that you wouldn't get them. You are certainly welcome for the feedback. As far as I'm concerned you earned it and then some. This story is fantastic, and it made me VERY HAPPY when I found it.
Oh, so Beast's full nickname for Belle was "Queen Bee". Now, the "Bee" nickname makes so much more sense. It was the only thing in the fic that I didn't completely understand. Thanks for the explanation!!! : )
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It is a long wishlist though, would you be happy with just one of those scenes?
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Clarification: Bee=Belle, Puppy=Gaston
Learning Curve”See? All these books say the same thing! I think we could really make this work ( ... )
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The image of "Berus" all spread open and on display for his Master and Mistress is YUMMY sigh inducing. That's just a delicious picture that you have painted. I like how you use canine imagery when "Berus" is lapping Belle, and the line about Beast "towering above them" while he takes "Berus" earns another YUMMY sigh!!! *yep, still drooling over Beast* LOL!!! ; ) I smiled when I read about Belle uttering an "elegant cry" when she reached her peak. That sounds like Belle.
I also LOVE that you were able to incorporate my second request into this story. I know that I asked for a lot, but you delivered it. The image of "Berus" taking Belle while Beast takes him is the sexiest and HOTTEST moment in this entire fic. SQUEE!!! : )
All in all, this was a GREAT read!!! THANK YOU again, Anon author!!! : )
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I like how you set the stage for "Puppy"'s breaking in by Beast. The darkened room in the castle, the stormy weather outside, and inside Beast is forcing "Puppy" to submit and admit that he really enjoys being taken even though he is shocked by this discovery. This is an altogether HOT, sexy, and enlightening scene. *drools over Beast* Belle's contemplation over the moment is good too. : )
It's nice to see that "Puppy" is starting to respond to his training as evidenced by his no longer needing to be supervised during his use of the depilatory agents.
I LOVE Belle's teasing and taunting!!! I LOVE how she displays herself like a treat and denies "Puppy"!!! I also LOVE how she once again attacks Gaston's pride by telling him that she "belong[s]" to Beast, and he is a better lover than Gaston will ever be.
Another excellent segment Anon author!!! : )
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First, my apologies for taking a month to respond to this post. Second, THANK YOU so MUCH for writing my prompt. I do appreciate it, and I think that you captured it very well. : ) I understand referring to Gaston as "Puppy". Most subs have a pet name, but I was confused about Belle's "Bee" unless that is Beast's pet name for her because he is the Dom in their relationship.
As for this portion of the fic, I LOVE how you base the training on canine/lupine pack hierarchy in order to train Gaston. Belle's comment when Beast becomes unnerved by her training methods gave me a chuckle (heehee), and Beast's "Exhaust him, good and proper" earns a YUMMY sigh. I did feel for "Puppy" when he was sheared and waxed, but Gaston's pride is his biggest problem, and even though I like the chest hair, this issue needed to be dealt with in this manner. GOOD job!!! Now, onto to the next chapter.
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Wow, thank you! I haven't had this much feedback since...never! (and the only time I've posted as anon in here, isn't that ironic or what :D)
Anyway, sorry about that Belle's nickname, I obviously edited too harshly, there was this bit of the story where Beast referred to Belle as his Queen Bee - it didn't add much to the story, so I cut it, except leaving the whole nickname itself. Eh, oops?
I do like to tell you that I wrote this whole story in only few days, so thank you for the great prompt that caused the plot bunny to attack - it was great fun writing this! And I'm happy I did justice to your vision, and you liked the story :)
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YAY!!! You found my comments. : ) I was afraid because it had been a while since you posted the story that you wouldn't get them. You are certainly welcome for the feedback. As far as I'm concerned you earned it and then some. This story is fantastic, and it made me VERY HAPPY when I found it.
Oh, so Beast's full nickname for Belle was "Queen Bee". Now, the "Bee" nickname makes so much more sense. It was the only thing in the fic that I didn't completely understand. Thanks for the explanation!!! : )
Take care!!! : )
Tarnished
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