after next week, when yet ANOTHER paper is due, I am going to sit down and give this a shot. It's too good not too. Also, I have some ideas going for John Smith/Kocoum.
Re: Title: SatisfactionguiltyhousewifeApril 21 2011, 22:32:30 UTC
Jasmine made an incredulous noise, looking backwards and up into Jafar's face to argue, only to have him grab her chin forcefully and return her attention back to Aladdin
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Re: Title: SatisfactionafterandalasiaApril 22 2011, 15:31:27 UTC
Oh god, yes. Oh my god. You have, indeed, got Jafar so magnificently wicked, using them so wonderfully against each other. And that little moment where they almost remember... yes. I love how they kept the feelings of their own personalities, whilst at the same time being under his control. Oh, yum indeed~
Re: Title: SatisfactionrberryberetJune 10 2011, 20:51:59 UTC
Oh, I love the way your mind works... This was perfect. I think that only really well written stories can make the reader feel emotion while reading the story -- and my heart hurt in the end. SO good! :D
Jafar manipulates or hypnotises both of them into being his slaves. Bonus points for worshipping him and barely remembering each other.
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