Prompt With Toy Story: Hawaiian Vacation Spoilers
anonymous
June 25 2011, 04:19:08 UTC
Buzz/Jessie
A fluffy moment before Jessie says “The entertainment will start in just a moment.” (Before Spanish Buzz shows up) involving Buzz being switched to Spanish mode. Like show me Buzz and Jessie deciding to have Buzz switch to Spanish Buzz for the entertainment. Is Buzz upset or amused? Whose idea was it? Did they decide/plan together? And show me the switch. Also, who tosses him the glow stick?
Bonus points: For Jessie being incredibly gentle with him during the process of switching him. For her kissing him luck before the switch and after the switch. For Jessie promising Buzz sexytimes later if he goes along with it. (And double for including some!)
Re: Prompt With Toy Story: Hawaiian Vacation SpoilersforbiddenktsJune 26 2011, 02:30:52 UTC
I loved that part of the short! Since I have an idea for this I might be able to fill it if no one else does. If not then maybe I can add mine as a second fill. ;D
Re: Prompt With Toy Story: Hawaiian Vacation Spoilers
anonymous
June 26 2011, 02:35:53 UTC
OP here. I loved that part of the short too. The delivery of that line I quoted is just... amazing. I could watch that scene over and over again. Good luck on working on any potential fills. :)
Ok, I have written the fic. I'm just making some finishing touches and figuring out how to end it. I hope you don't mind, but I changed it a bit. After watching the short a few times I've noticed something about Buzz's Spanish Mode. Now I could be wrong, but I figured this was the perfect chance to try this out.
The Bonus Points are still there so don't worry. :)
OP here. That's perfectly fine. I think Spanish mode is something that's so ambiguous it's up to the viewer or fanfic writer or reader. And it's quite interesting! Try away. :) Look forward to reading. :)
Hawaiian Payoff Part 1/???forbiddenktsJune 30 2011, 23:39:57 UTC
A/N:To understand what Buzz is saying in Spanish go to google and punch this into the search engine: "translation2 paralink". I can't find a translator that can help me use the exact Spanish that Buzz speaks so I had to find the one that sounded very similar. Hope that doesn't cause much of a problem. I would have used google translate, but it's not getting the results I want for this particular fic
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Hawaiian Payoff Part 2/???forbiddenktsJune 30 2011, 23:42:10 UTC
Slightly startled, Buzz picked his head up to see Jessie sprinting towards him. For a split second he thought something was wrong. That is until he noticed the look in her eyes once she stopped in front of him
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Hawaiian Payoff Part 4/???forbiddenktsJune 30 2011, 23:44:59 UTC
"Hola señoras y señores.", he put his hand up in the air for Jessie to throw him the glow stick. Once he caught it, he turned it on and started to dance all over the stage. Moving his hips, spinning around and twirling the stick in his hands. He thought it would be a nice touch to do some more tricks so he tossed the stick into the air and caught it
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Re: Hawaiian Payoff Part 5/???
anonymous
July 1 2011, 01:57:38 UTC
OP here!
I really enjoyed this! And I like the idea of Buzz being able to control his Spanish side without having to switch to be reset to Spanish. I love Spanish mode but there's a few squicky issues I have it myself (mostly involving consent). Anyways. I love that they mentioned their own first kiss. Daww! I kinda figured it would bring back memories of their own!
I also love that Jessie mentions Lilo & Stitch to Buzz (specifically, the Estrogen Brigade Bait that is David!). I bet Bonnie watched that before she left. Hehe.
And I'm all right with it taking place after Jessie says it, also. No worries. I mean, given the shortness of the short, there's no way to know when the switch happened exactly.
And love the way Jessie promises he'll get to play with her string if he goes along with. Nice. Mmm. Delicious. And then "Then you can find someone else to cuddle with tonight." Hehe. I just love that. So amusing. Jessie, you're such a tease! XD
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Re: Hawaiian Payoff Part 5/???
anonymous
July 3 2011, 01:12:07 UTC
(OP) Oh, I hope that Barbie and Ken aren't an indication of how slow/fast relationships go among toys. I'll wager a guess that because of the events of 3, Ken decided to take things slow with her and needed to regain her trust. I also hope Buzz and Jessie have had their first kiss by now (or further). I'm too emotionally attached to this couple to be okay with them taking things way slow.
Bonnie watching L&S while with all her toys is way cute. (There's also a fic here where Bonnie plays with Boo and Lilo and it's way cute, too!)
The look on her face is kind of tentative like she's not sure if she'll succeed in her plan. I see it. And it would have been nice to see the switch too. Out of curiosity, and to see him being switched in a much less threatening or frightening light.
I'll definitely second that. I really want a Buzz/Jessie focused short. I like Barbie/Ken (a childhood of playing with Barbies certainly helped) but I care more about Buzz and Jessie.
Hawaiian Payoff Part 6/6 = Author's Note!forbiddenktsJune 30 2011, 23:47:27 UTC
Now for those who were wondering what was off (if you didn't catch it), in the short Buzz was most likely set into Spanish Mode. After watching the short a few more times on youtube, I'm sure that Buzz might be able to control it. I explored this a bit in my fic "No Need For A Switch". I imagine that Jessie probably found some fun ways to mess with Buzz's Spanish Mode without actually switching him over. That way Buzz is more comfortable. After a while Buzz might have found a way to keep it under control or at the very least know what's going on when switched over. ;D
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A fluffy moment before Jessie says “The entertainment will start in just a moment.” (Before Spanish Buzz shows up) involving Buzz being switched to Spanish mode. Like show me Buzz and Jessie deciding to have Buzz switch to Spanish Buzz for the entertainment. Is Buzz upset or amused? Whose idea was it? Did they decide/plan together? And show me the switch. Also, who tosses him the glow stick?
Bonus points:
For Jessie being incredibly gentle with him during the process of switching him.
For her kissing him luck before the switch and after the switch.
For Jessie promising Buzz sexytimes later if he goes along with it. (And double for including some!)
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Ok, I have written the fic. I'm just making some finishing touches and figuring out how to end it. I hope you don't mind, but I changed it a bit. After watching the short a few times I've noticed something about Buzz's Spanish Mode. Now I could be wrong, but I figured this was the perfect chance to try this out.
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I really enjoyed this! And I like the idea of Buzz being able to control his Spanish side without having to switch to be reset to Spanish. I love Spanish mode but there's a few squicky issues I have it myself (mostly involving consent). Anyways. I love that they mentioned their own first kiss. Daww! I kinda figured it would bring back memories of their own!
I also love that Jessie mentions Lilo & Stitch to Buzz (specifically, the Estrogen Brigade Bait that is David!). I bet Bonnie watched that before she left. Hehe.
And I'm all right with it taking place after Jessie says it, also. No worries. I mean, given the shortness of the short, there's no way to know when the switch happened exactly.
And love the way Jessie promises he'll get to play with her string if he goes along with. Nice. Mmm. Delicious. And then "Then you can find someone else to cuddle with tonight." Hehe. I just love that. So amusing. Jessie, you're such a tease! XD ( ... )
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Bonnie watching L&S while with all her toys is way cute. (There's also a fic here where Bonnie plays with Boo and Lilo and it's way cute, too!)
The look on her face is kind of tentative like she's not sure if she'll succeed in her plan. I see it. And it would have been nice to see the switch too. Out of curiosity, and to see him being switched in a much less threatening or frightening light.
I'll definitely second that. I really want a Buzz/Jessie focused short. I like Barbie/Ken (a childhood of playing with Barbies certainly helped) but I care more about Buzz and Jessie.
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