Brave MINOR SPOILERS
anonymous
July 1 2012, 22:56:20 UTC
www.youtube.com/watch?v=j4a7n37Mx8I
The above Brave promo featuring the triplets acting out the story of how King Fergus won Queen Elinor's hand in marriage made me really want fic of that contest. I'd be happy with pretty much anything, but something that had a bittersweet or happy ending and concentrated on Elinor's thoughts specifically would be great. It's by no means necessary, but I would love for there to be sex afterwards (or even sex before? I'd love to see Elinor's naughty side)
Re: Brave MINOR SPOILERSdisneykinkloverJuly 13 2012, 02:43:59 UTC
I'm working on something for this... Curious if you could maybe help me with a piece of movie fact? Right around 1:10-1:16, Elinor says "...noble Fergus vanquished the (hard to hear) [rogue]? Yes! With a nimble counter and deft (unintelligible)...!" What is the unintelligible word after "nimble counter and deft ____"? Personally, I want to know so that I can write a better piece. :)
Re: Brave MINOR SPOILERSdisneykinkloverJuly 14 2012, 03:21:00 UTC
This is coming far slower than it should...
Just a handful of notes and information from my head-cannon of Brave…
• I don’t feel that ‘DunBroch’ is the name of Fergus’ original clan. In the movie there’s a line about Fergus uniting the lords for battle and the other lords made him their king. Therefore, I have come to the idea that ‘DunBroch’ is the name of the city/area where the castle resides OR the collective name of the four united clans. Either or is fine with me. o According to Wikipedia, a ‘broch’ is probably either a stone military structure or a farmhouse; but neither is for sure. I’ve gone with the idea of a military structure; thus the usage of it in naming the castle/four clans
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Oh wow, you put a lot of thought and research into my little old prompt, I'm so flattered! O////O
Your writing is simply lovely, I like the little details you put into it (like Fergus lying to his father) and the fact that Fergus has had a thing for Elinor for a long time but never fully realized it. I also adore the fact that he plans to woo her as well as fight for her. Wonderful! Thank you so much D*sneyKink!
I'm glad you like it! Here's another little tidbid... Damn work is taking up all of my time and causing stress.
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Archery, at which Fergus proved himself to be a master archer
Fergus steeled his mind against the multitude of noises assaulting his ears. Archery had never been his best sport. The care of arrows and the bow, the quiver always got in his way, and the stringing and loosening to hit the target. His large frame meant strength which meant many a broken bow. But a lord's son and a hunter and warrior must be proficient in all areas of weapons, and train intensely he had. Pushing all of his concentration on the tiny spec of the middle of the target over a hundred and a half paces away, Fergus blew out a breath and let loose his arrow.
Re: Winning Her HeartdisneykinkloverAugust 9 2012, 22:05:53 UTC
*Pouts* Damn LJ... you think I'd be able to edit my own post! >:(
Hmmm... Dingwall, not Dingwald. Shit.
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Macintosh had hit within the center circle, MacGuffin near-abouts the same. Dingwall was his only true opponent when it came to archery. Nearly a decade ahead of the other three, Dingwall specialized in archery. His arrow had hit near the same as Fergus' arrow had hit. Two Aileas men were required to measure the exact spot the arrows had hit to decide who had won the archery tournament. Fegurs' arrow was half a finger's width closer to the center than Dingwall's.
Fergus simply smiled while the other three lords whined. His ears heard Elinor clapping and his eyes saw his father's proud face. His heart rattled in his ribs, threatening to shatter his resolve.
The hammer throw; again, Fergus excelled, besting all others
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The above Brave promo featuring the triplets acting out the story of how King Fergus won Queen Elinor's hand in marriage made me really want fic of that contest. I'd be happy with pretty much anything, but something that had a bittersweet or happy ending and concentrated on Elinor's thoughts specifically would be great. It's by no means necessary, but I would love for there to be sex afterwards (or even sex before? I'd love to see Elinor's naughty side)
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Just a handful of notes and information from my head-cannon of Brave…
• I don’t feel that ‘DunBroch’ is the name of Fergus’ original clan. In the movie there’s a line about Fergus uniting the lords for battle and the other lords made him their king. Therefore, I have come to the idea that ‘DunBroch’ is the name of the city/area where the castle resides OR the collective name of the four united clans. Either or is fine with me.
o According to Wikipedia, a ‘broch’ is probably either a stone military structure or a farmhouse; but neither is for sure. I’ve gone with the idea of a military structure; thus the usage of it in naming the castle/four clans ( ... )
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Your writing is simply lovely, I like the little details you put into it (like Fergus lying to his father) and the fact that Fergus has had a thing for Elinor for a long time but never fully realized it. I also adore the fact that he plans to woo her as well as fight for her. Wonderful! Thank you so much D*sneyKink!
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Archery, at which Fergus proved himself to be a master archer
Fergus steeled his mind against the multitude of noises assaulting his ears. Archery had never been his best sport. The care of arrows and the bow, the quiver always got in his way, and the stringing and loosening to hit the target. His large frame meant strength which meant many a broken bow. But a lord's son and a hunter and warrior must be proficient in all areas of weapons, and train intensely he had. Pushing all of his concentration on the tiny spec of the middle of the target over a hundred and a half paces away, Fergus blew out a breath and let loose his arrow.
Center-hit!
The crowd cheered.
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Hmmm... Dingwall, not Dingwald. Shit.
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Macintosh had hit within the center circle, MacGuffin near-abouts the same. Dingwall was his only true opponent when it came to archery. Nearly a decade ahead of the other three, Dingwall specialized in archery. His arrow had hit near the same as Fergus' arrow had hit. Two Aileas men were required to measure the exact spot the arrows had hit to decide who had won the archery tournament. Fegurs' arrow was half a finger's width closer to the center than Dingwall's.
Fergus simply smiled while the other three lords whined. His ears heard Elinor clapping and his eyes saw his father's proud face. His heart rattled in his ribs, threatening to shatter his resolve.
The hammer throw; again, Fergus excelled, besting all others ( ... )
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