Re: Prompt (Pocahontas)afterandalasiaApril 21 2011, 11:41:05 UTC
Unf. Just unf. I wasn't even sure whether I was expecting smut from this, but man, I think I'm beginning to see the appeal of slash!
I love the way that you wrote Kocoum, without naming him or giving any words from him or anything. It makes for a really interesting POV.
One thing I will say -- antepenultimate paragraph, starting with "Please". It seems a little garbled to me, and I'm struggling to understand it a bit. It doesn't take away from the story, though~
Re: Prompt (Pocahontas)guiltyhousewifeApril 21 2011, 19:15:58 UTC
:( Meh, I had to write fast. I can't actually save anything on my computer, because I share it, so it was a race to finish. If I would have proofread, I would have noticed the lack of clarity. I'm glad you liked it in spite of that, though.
Re: Prompt (Pocahontas)guiltyhousewifeApril 21 2011, 21:20:00 UTC
Agreed.
So are you a slash convert, then? I mean, femslash seems to be your thing, that and romantic gen, but have I lured you fully into the dark side? (We have chocolate!)
Re: Prompt (Pocahontas)afterandalasiaApril 21 2011, 21:31:36 UTC
XD I'm kinda waiting for the unfilled prompt list to be updated... tbh I think that overall villains are just my thing, and Jafar has to fight with the others for my attention.
I really need to try and get hold of some of the series online... I vaguely remember Mozenrath, but haven't watched the series since... hell, probably the nineties. I think I had the VHS tapes, which dates it quite a lot.
This user has uploaded every single episode. Mozenrath is SUCH an awesome character. Mozenrath/Aladdin was my first slash pairing. I wrote so much stuff on them, but I haven't in quite awhile (this place sort of took over my brain, lol)
Now I will say this: to my chagrin, the artwork of Aladdin the series is somewhat...uglier....than the movie. It feels more rushed, more cartoony.
Re: Prompt (Pocahontas)dedlitMay 5 2011, 11:16:38 UTC
OH MY GOD!!!! I love those two together, I'm totally the slasher who does like dub-con (and non-con) in combination with two strong men, this just fullfilled both of my favorite fantasies!
more prompts for that would be appreciated!
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I love the way that you wrote Kocoum, without naming him or giving any words from him or anything. It makes for a really interesting POV.
One thing I will say -- antepenultimate paragraph, starting with "Please". It seems a little garbled to me, and I'm struggling to understand it a bit. It doesn't take away from the story, though~
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Meh, I had to write fast. I can't actually save anything on my computer, because I share it, so it was a race to finish. If I would have proofread, I would have noticed the lack of clarity. I'm glad you liked it in spite of that, though.
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So are you a slash convert, then? I mean, femslash seems to be your thing, that and romantic gen, but have I lured you fully into the dark side? (We have chocolate!)
*small voice* moaraladdinslashmaybe?
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I really need to try and get hold of some of the series online... I vaguely remember Mozenrath, but haven't watched the series since... hell, probably the nineties. I think I had the VHS tapes, which dates it quite a lot.
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This user has uploaded every single episode. Mozenrath is SUCH an awesome character. Mozenrath/Aladdin was my first slash pairing. I wrote so much stuff on them, but I haven't in quite awhile (this place sort of took over my brain, lol)
Now I will say this: to my chagrin, the artwork of Aladdin the series is somewhat...uglier....than the movie. It feels more rushed, more cartoony.
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