hunchback of notre dame
anonymous
April 27 2011, 23:13:58 UTC
To ensure the safety of her friends, Esmeralda marries Frollo, but has a secret affair with her beloved Captain Phoebus. Frollo finds out and makes Esmeralda watch as the guards torture and rape phoebus severely on his command. Bonuspoints if Esmeralda promises Frollo to end it, and kills the broken phoebus (who still loves her) and when she tries to kill Frollo, too, she gets killed by the guards.
Broken - Part 5little_elfieJanuary 28 2012, 03:22:37 UTC
Dawn in Paris.
Roused by a familiar cacophony as the Palace of Justice stirred and roared to life around her, Esmeralda awoke to find herself on the floor, shivering and stiff-limbed. She opened her eyes, blinking owlishly at the brightness of the day, and stretched, only to yelp in pained surprise as her entire body seemed to scream in protest.
A few tense moments passed before the young woman could bring herself to move, uncurling her limbs with deliberate caution; she winced and gnawed at her lip, stifling a cry of dismay as the extent of her injuries became apparent. Bruises mottled the exposed planes of her torso, fresh and numerous, in livid shades of purple and yellow. Her wrists were chafed and raw, her breasts...oh!
Memories of the previous evening, disjointed and hazy, flickered though Esmeralda's mind...Frollo looming above her, his face twisted into a demon's mask...his hands around her throat...she was dying, her last thoughts of her family and friends...of Phoebus, waiting for her in his cottage by the river..."
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Re: Broken - Part 5dmillacwJanuary 29 2012, 04:06:27 UTC
*shudders* (in a good way). I love how Frollo can cause such a chill down my spine. You know the characters well, your writing is superb. And Esmeralda really should've bathe before she got home.
Though I do wonder what Frollo has up his sadistic sleeves when getting his revenge? Hmm...
Broken - Part 6little_elfieFebruary 6 2012, 00:14:33 UTC
The afternoon passed in a blur of fear and pain for Esmeralda. Dressed in the ragged shift of a condemned soul, she waited for what seemed like an eternity, blowing on her fingers in a desperate attempt to fend off the cold. When Frollo finally reappeared, she kept her angry gaze fixed on the flagstones at his feet, determined not to provoke him into further violence...his temper was unpredictable at the best of times. The gypsy hissed through her teeth as he propelled her forward roughly; she caught her lip between her teeth as the raw wounds on her back opened at his touch and began to bleed anew
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Broken - Part 7little_elfieFebruary 10 2012, 01:12:12 UTC
As she descended into the darkness, Esmeralda felt her gorge rise as the stench of decay and misery rose up to meet her. She paused and closed her eyes, dreading what was to come...Phoebus, her golden lion, could be dying in this nightmarish place and she couldn't even speak to him, let alone hold him in her arms...
Frollo was close behind her, his fingers digging into the tender flesh of her forearm, and Esmeralda bared her teeth in silent fury as his warning flashed through her mind; "You will obey my every command, without question or complaint. You will not attempt to comfort the prisoner, or communicate with him. The slightest transgression on your part will only result in further suffering for the unfortunate Captain Phoebus; he will be punished in your stead and you will watch. Do I make myself clear, Esmeralda?""Esmeralda
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Bonuspoints if Esmeralda promises Frollo to end it, and kills the broken phoebus (who still loves her) and when she tries to kill Frollo, too, she gets killed by the guards.
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Roused by a familiar cacophony as the Palace of Justice stirred and roared to life around her, Esmeralda awoke to find herself on the floor, shivering and stiff-limbed. She opened her eyes, blinking owlishly at the brightness of the day, and stretched, only to yelp in pained surprise as her entire body seemed to scream in protest.
A few tense moments passed before the young woman could bring herself to move, uncurling her limbs with deliberate caution; she winced and gnawed at her lip, stifling a cry of dismay as the extent of her injuries became apparent. Bruises mottled the exposed planes of her torso, fresh and numerous, in livid shades of purple and yellow. Her wrists were chafed and raw, her breasts...oh!
Memories of the previous evening, disjointed and hazy, flickered though Esmeralda's mind...Frollo looming above her, his face twisted into a demon's mask...his hands around her throat...she was dying, her last thoughts of her family and friends...of Phoebus, waiting for her in his cottage by the river..." ( ... )
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Though I do wonder what Frollo has up his sadistic sleeves when getting his revenge? Hmm...
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I'm SO happy you didn't forget this fic ^______^
Can't wait for chapter 6!
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But I'm happy that part 6 was there so fast
and I'm looking forward to part 7 ^_____^
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Frollo was close behind her, his fingers digging into the tender flesh of her forearm, and Esmeralda bared her teeth in silent fury as his warning flashed through her mind; "You will obey my every command, without question or complaint. You will not attempt to comfort the prisoner, or communicate with him. The slightest transgression on your part will only result in further suffering for the unfortunate Captain Phoebus; he will be punished in your stead and you will watch. Do I make myself clear, Esmeralda?""Esmeralda ( ... )
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