Prompt Post 3!

Jul 12, 2012 23:37



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Cinderella anonymous December 18 2013, 08:49:50 UTC
Inspired by rewatching Cinderella: there's this part where Lady Tremaine calls Cinderella in to be reprimanded and Anastasia and Drizella are all like, "Ooh now she's got it coming!" and peer through the keyhole. I'd basically like to see a kinkier version of that, with Cinderella being punished, spanked, or sexually humiliated by Tremaine while the stepsisters spy.

In short: Anastasia and Drizella love seeing their stepmother discipline Cinderella.

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FILL - Vantage Point (1) salmon_pink February 28 2014, 21:15:29 UTC
They could take it in turns, they could share, but they don’t. They never do. Instead they hunch forward, shoulders knocking together, elbows in each others sides and hissed insults on their lips. Jostling for the right to stare through the keyhole, eyes wide and hungry ( ... )

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FILL - Vantage Point (2) salmon_pink February 28 2014, 21:16:13 UTC
The first strike is so loud, even through the thick wood of the door. Cinderella rocks on her feet slightly, and that is how they can tell how strong the blow is. Sometimes their mother will start slow, will start light, small slaps and taps that only pinken the skin instead of reddening it. Building the burn slowly until the way Cinderella’s breathing has grown laboured is obvious, even from their hiding place ( ... )

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FILL - Vantage Point (3) salmon_pink February 28 2014, 21:16:44 UTC
And beyond the door, their mother’s hand tangles in Cinderella’s hair, pulls until her neck is arched back, vulnerable and trapped. The other hand dropping beneath Cinderella’s thighs, and their stepsister’s anguished and needy wail carries clearly through the door ( ... )

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Re: FILL - Vantage Point (3) radondoran March 1 2014, 02:39:17 UTC
Oh man, this is really well done. I love the narrative voice, the sense of understanding between the two sisters on their mother's secrets and their shared forbidden pleasure.

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