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fieryrogue May 5 2015, 16:37:10 UTC
Aww! I love this idea that they've gone on this adventure together and end up falling in love with each other instead. Great job!

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odi_et_amo53 May 5 2015, 17:24:34 UTC
Ah thank you! I procrastinated so much I ended up cutting out a lot of what I had planned.

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rajkumari905 May 6 2015, 21:17:56 UTC
Eeee yes!!! I've been excited for this since you told me about it and it's so cute! I was not prepared for Cook leaving though omg. EIGHT MONTHS. ARCHULETA WHAT THE HECK.

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odi_et_amo53 May 7 2015, 20:47:51 UTC
HI. So I've been considering writing Archie's side of all that craziness. But idk. ANYWAYS.

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rajkumari905 May 7 2015, 20:53:06 UTC
TO THIS I SAY

YES!

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abovetheruins May 12 2015, 14:58:11 UTC
Ahhh, my heart broke when Cook left. I'm glad I was alone when I was reading this because I was literally yelling "TELL HIM HOW YOU FEEL YOU IDIOT" at my screen.

Also, I'm choosing to believe that Archie had some totally valid reasons for taking eight months to get back to Cook. (DAMN IT, ARCHULETA)

Loved this adaptation, Ariel!

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odi_et_amo53 May 18 2015, 13:45:35 UTC
Look, we all know they're both big ol'dumb dumbs. I just wanted to stay true to the characters ;)

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rhiminee_1 May 16 2015, 05:16:26 UTC
"She was a bitch." BEST. LINE.

This was the cutest cutest thing! Cook is so in love and my heart is just alsdifjaisdjfiaosdj.

Thank you so much for writing this and for sharing it! I enjoyed it so much!!! <3

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odi_et_amo53 May 18 2015, 13:46:54 UTC
She was a bitch was the basis for the story, ngl. It was the first scene I envisioned.

But TYSM!

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